allow me this moment~ to stare into the eyes of this~ amazing being~ and cause my unhindered imagination~ to ride along the rhythm~ of her song. if music is alive~ then her eyes be of the living. they invoke the Spirit~ of comfort within me` as my inner man~ gives way to genial sway. if eyes are indeed~ the window to ones soul~ and if even at all possible~ souls can touch~ then i humbly muse~ in this awesome embrace. as does Mighty Ra~ when he reaches out into the universe~ so does the energy that ~ emanates from your light. let the music play~ let the darkness that existed sease~ and let it be said this day~ that ive brushed the wings of~ an Angel ~ One with eyes like rubies~ and~ the object of my ~ imagination... she is paradise.
oH MY GOODNESS...FOR JUST LIKE 7 SECONDS i FELL IN DEEP PASSIONATE LOVE WITH YOU!! LOL...NAH BUT REALLY!! This piece is beautiful and I read it with my eyes open. Even if I were to pin point a certain part I liked most I'd just end up qouting the whole poem!! Beautiful Sizzla...beautiful!!
always enjoy your work and this is no different if eyes are indeed~ the window to ones soul~ and if even at all possible~ souls can touch~ then i humbly muse~ in this awesome embrace. lovin that as well as the end up
very strong piece...indeed...great imagery metaphoric use of words.. I have no real other reply then that
I smell oh so clearly the scents you have laid down before us with your words... ...but one that bring bitter-sweet emotions, ones which i smell oh so often, imbedded in my soul, my mind, my heart...my thoughts......compounded by the relative beauty of this poem... ...nothing else to say... ..resp...
These metaphorical statements really gets to me, I was loving the style and organization of the poem. I as well kept my eyes strady moving down the piece, listening to the voice of the one who wrote it. A piece that had me dwelling upon everything you had said, mos def. My blessings..