look what i dug up!!! peep this song!!

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  1. Mini Thin

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  2. phillipdrummond

    phillipdrummond get at me for footage

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    okay, honest opinion/constructive crit:
    not feeling your flow, too bouncy, be more precise with the number of syllables per line as well.
    not feeling the beat, I'm really picky about that type of thing.
    lyrics are really boring and don't entertain me, you could be more eloquent or funny about such a topic, which I don't really find funny at all, but that's me being politically correct I suppose.
    I'd develop your flow and get better beats, also the recording quality of the vocals is pretty bad. sorry dude, i hate to bash, just trying to give you an honest opinion and let you build off it.
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  3. Mini Thin

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    please re-read my post kid!!!!!!! that is 2 years old/radio shack mic/ a beat from online/acid (original version) & the first song i ever recorded!!! Things have REALLY changed since then playboy,but umm thanks for the criticizm i could have most definately used it in 2000!!!
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    haha LMAO that is funny shit kid! your a twizid person but funny as fuck
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    phillipdrummond get at me for footage

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