Locked in the trunk..

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  1. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Locked in the trunk..


    I have a story to tell.


    To keep it in is toxic...


    I feel sick to think about it,


    so your the one I'll talk with...
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    20 August 1976

    I awoke in hell..
    I'll tell you of the darkest plot...

    no fire - brimstone,
    I was in the parking lot...

    to start's the hard part...
    can't take a breath, coughin...

    the day was cold and dark,
    I thought of death often...

    cherishing every breath,
    I seemed cautious...

    whoever put me here is sick,
    I don't mean nauseous...

    a total surprise,
    I didn't know the disquise

    was gonna hit me like a freight train,
    you'll notice the size...

    of the ride in the picture.
    it looks deceiving...

    the trunk's actually bigger,
    this aint a book I'm reading...

    it was real life then,
    I was shook and bleeding...

    the devil played a part,
    I hate the crooked heathen...

    the engine seemed alive,
    like it would have to breathe...

    I swear it had a pulse,
    and it's blood was gasoline...

    it had me in it's clutches..
    with no way to escape...

    I was on my way to hell,
    but had to wait at the gate...

    every minute seemed eternity,
    with the motor runnin...

    like I'm gonna die,
    and now I know it's commin...

    I'm shiverin cold,
    I can feel the goosebumps...

    as we swerve down the road,
    I'm prayin for a loose trunk...

    the wind was howling...
    just like the devil's dog...

    we race down darkness
    in a heavy fog...

    I can't think straight,
    I saw a blink, he hit the brakes...

    if he pops the trunk
    then I'm fit to escape...

    I can't even think,
    how long I've been trapped....

    soon enough it all changed,
    weight on the the gas...

    it was dark here,
    but the speed was blinding...

    it didn't take long,
    I heard the cops and sirens...

    whats it gonna take,
    to stop this violence...

    we need to pull together
    to stop the tyrants...

    don't think this is fake,
    written script...

    I was in the car,
    when it flipped in the ditch...

    when I came to,
    tried to move, was afraid to...

    ain't the same dude,
    who can I put the blame to...

    later found out,
    I was lucky to survive...

    I should live stress free
    and be alive..

    my freedom and my life,
    no one can take from me...

    Because the man that I escaped,
    was Ted Bundy...
    test
  2. dsp2k5

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    i liked this drop ... nice story telling vibe to it that kept it going all the way through, the flow was right, too ... im guessing its not a true story though?
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  3. nO gOoD!

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  4. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    yeah thats pretty good man good imagery paintin a picture with words the way you described the car made it seem like you were trippin an paranoid that was cool haha
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  5. cram oremor

    cram oremor New Member

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    like it especially after I heard it on track. Thats one long verse!
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  6. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    thx for the feedback fellas I'll return the favor
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  7. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Wow, i like how you put your lines together it makes it real easy to read, its like a trick on the eye like its not the much but as u get started u were pulled in and hadda figure out what is gonna happen.. Very original...

    This was a sick transition
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  8. Arsenic P

    Arsenic P A.K.A. PROPOSITION P

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    *reads thinks* dope i like it i like it alot from start to finish you killed it my nigga.1
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