Linnzi's song - new track with lyrics

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  1. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    [youtube]bmfn_ZXGFCg[/youtube]

    I always choose to live a life of solitude and pain
    shutting out the world from the problems and the strain
    knew that I was damaged but she followed me the same
    my hearts feeling bandaged and it’s hollow in the rain
    I thought I tasted love but I’m starving once again
    oh god tell me why is it so hard to face the end
    won’t pardon it – pretend, or act like it’s me
    sometimes in life it’s how it happens to be
    why’d it happen to me, I miss you passionately
    every kiss and hug is just a past that I see
    as I cast off to sea under burdened skies
    The sight of your eyes have been burned in my eyes
    I curse the curse of goodbye, say this verse as I cry
    grew up with little love feeling tortured inside
    “WHY DO I ALWAYS GET BURNED WHEN I TRY!”
    Linnzi I hope you’ll return to my life

    Hook:
    Your gone – my heart feels like broken glass
    it happened so sweet then was over fast
    my tears run deep when the smoke has past
    here we go again down this lonely path

    your eyes shown hazel, a slender angel
    who blessed me but left my heart entangled
    flowers into weeds, welcomed with no fight
    for six months straight you held me every me night
    always pretty and sharp, so witty and smart
    Don’t see you anymore but you live in my heart
    it’s breaking me in two, I would change it if knew
    hearts hanging by a few, no escaping from my blues
    yeah I really wish that you had taken me with you
    I’m thankful though it’s true, changed and yes I grew
    learned to love your kid and now I losing him to
    wish I knew what to do - but feel so detached
    A tear behind a frown behind a soul collapsed
    …the bright road I saw is now a lonely path
    doors closed so fast, oh what I’ve been through
    I don’t know what to say but I love and miss you
    test
  2. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    Color me surprised, because the title of this thread had me envisioning something completely different...

    ^Because you can fail, crash and burn as many times as it takes, in order to make the one time work, and hopefully that one time lasts you a lifetime. Regretting not giving it your all would be potentially worse and filled with "what ifs".

    Dope drop..:props:
    test
  3. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    thank you

    yeah its been a downward spiral for awhile.. i've been strugglen'
    test
  4. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    You're welcome...keep your head up!
    test
  5. katherine4

    katherine4 New Member

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    nice~ Thanks
    test
  6. ThatsNotMyName

    ThatsNotMyName The Conquering Lion

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    I can feel the passion, kick-ass lyrics.
    Not so much a fan of the white-boy flow and monotonus delivery.
    test
  7. JiHaD210

    JiHaD210 REAL RECOGNIZE REAL

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    this is the one time i'vd agree with TNMN
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  8. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    too monotone I agree...too flat, too basic

    I liked the beat though....not trying to be mean spirited, just honest...

    but for what it is, I'm sure you had a lots of fun creating this...that's the best
    test
  9. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    ouch.. yeah my voice is just like that.. always has been
    test
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