Lil story

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  1. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    well that's the point exactly. I wrote it in that tone drinking a few buds I remember. It was written very quick and I am very happy of the response this has received. I think drinking puts one in the written zone. It's hard to find it sometimes.

    I had the Outsiders and the beat neck generation in mine when sitting to write this.

    Thanks for reading friend.
    test
  2. ScimonomicS

    ScimonomicS New Member

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    I have a question for you that is not meant in any sort of negative manner. Are you opposed to revising your poetry? I know some people are some people aren't, so that will let me know what kind of feedback I can give you that would be worthwhile. I'm kind of in workshop mode right now because of this class but I guess a lot of you guys have probably already reworked many times before posting.
    test
  3. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    I don't rework my stuff. This was written in one try very quick and I don't want it to be anything more than it is. I'm not that into it.

    but go ahead, rip it up. I don't mind. it is what it is. i guess.
    test
  4. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    lol
    good write
    test
  5. hearstothemute

    hearstothemute New Member

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    ha, felt like more of a hyper-flashfiction. but it was cool. i really liked how your "falling
    into a nursery of short attentions" line came across. loved that.
    test
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