Lil story

well that's the point exactly. I wrote it in that tone drinking a few buds I remember. It was written very quick and I am very happy of the response this has received. I think drinking puts one in the written zone. It's hard to find it sometimes.

I had the Outsiders and the beat neck generation in mine when sitting to write this.

Thanks for reading friend.

I have a question for you that is not meant in any sort of negative manner. Are you opposed to revising your poetry? I know some people are some people aren't, so that will let me know what kind of feedback I can give you that would be worthwhile. I'm kind of in workshop mode right now because of this class but I guess a lot of you guys have probably already reworked many times before posting.

I don't rework my stuff. This was written in one try very quick and I don't want it to be anything more than it is. I'm not that into it.

but go ahead, rip it up. I don't mind. it is what it is. i guess.

lol
good write

ha, felt like more of a hyper-flashfiction. but it was cool. i really liked how your "falling
into a nursery of short attentions" line came across. loved that.