Lightsaber Flow

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  1. Shawn Phillips

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    Shawn Phillips - Lightsaber Flow produced by Dante Desperado
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  2. Majestic1990

    Majestic1990 Peace and Love

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    Lyrics and vocabulary are beautiful.

    I thought the hook could be better, it was kind of repetitive. Should have been longer and switching up in lyrics a little.

    Nice choice for a beat also. Delivery is perfect

    Overall it's a nice track and I can see somebody riding to this in a car
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    Pretty nice, had some commercial appeal to it. Nothing was mind-blowing, but overall it's solid. The hook was a little uninspired, but, still. This was polished.
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  4. Mondo Goe

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    Hey Shawn Phillips,

    that track is crazy! Such a clean record, nice flow and pronunciation.
    Very very professional! You did a great Job on this one!

    -TheBeatsmyth
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  5. Mondo Goe

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    Oh and it would be an honour to work with you, since I'm a prodcuer.
    I got some freebeats and would love to hear your spit on them!
    Let me know what you think: mascnoone@gmail.com
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  6. Shawn Phillips

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    thanks for the feed guys! yah for sure ill check some beats out and email you dude!
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  7. Shawn Phillips

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    yawnnnn. bump
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  8. Shawn Phillips

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    why so tired.. stop sleeping
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    Excellent flow. I enjoyed the beat as well. I'm not one for repetitive hooks; not saying it sounds out of the norm in this song nor was the style done incorrectly, so it may just be preference there. Keep up the fantastic work.
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  10. Shawn Phillips

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    thanks man appreciate it :) lets get some more comments people loving the feedback!
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  11. BraidzMC

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    This is fucking great man, every track i hear from you is an improvement from the last one, thats what i look for in an artist.
    Lyrics were on point, Flow was Lightsaber-like. Beat fit it perfectly. Good work.
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  12. da_soundman

    da_soundman J.Smo of BUNKS

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    You came hard over this beat fam. I can tell it grabbed you deep and brought out the ill flows. A little lyrical alteration on the hook would add a lil extra spice but I'm really diggin this track.

    From the vibe to the delivery to the production.
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    DeathChamberz From the Page to da stage

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  14. Shawn Phillips

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    good looks everybody!! feed returned! uppin!!
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  17. Shawn Phillips

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    thx guys, feed returned! new track comin soon! uppin for noww.
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  18. New Life Records

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    feedback was not returned bruh
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  19. Shawn Phillips

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    i missed your link sorry man! doin it nowww!
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    light saber flow... i got the force bro....
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