Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Shawn Phillips, Jul 13, 2012.
Shawn Phillips - Lightsaber Flow produced by Dante Desperado
Lyrics and vocabulary are beautiful.
I thought the hook could be better, it was kind of repetitive. Should have been longer and switching up in lyrics a little.
Nice choice for a beat also. Delivery is perfect
Overall it's a nice track and I can see somebody riding to this in a car
Pretty nice, had some commercial appeal to it. Nothing was mind-blowing, but overall it's solid. The hook was a little uninspired, but, still. This was polished.
Hey Shawn Phillips,
that track is crazy! Such a clean record, nice flow and pronunciation.
Very very professional! You did a great Job on this one!
Oh and it would be an honour to work with you, since I'm a prodcuer.
I got some freebeats and would love to hear your spit on them!
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thanks for the feed guys! yah for sure ill check some beats out and email you dude!
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Excellent flow. I enjoyed the beat as well. I'm not one for repetitive hooks; not saying it sounds out of the norm in this song nor was the style done incorrectly, so it may just be preference there. Keep up the fantastic work.
thanks man appreciate it lets get some more comments people loving the feedback!
This is fucking great man, every track i hear from you is an improvement from the last one, thats what i look for in an artist.
Lyrics were on point, Flow was Lightsaber-like. Beat fit it perfectly. Good work.
You came hard over this beat fam. I can tell it grabbed you deep and brought out the ill flows. A little lyrical alteration on the hook would add a lil extra spice but I'm really diggin this track.
From the vibe to the delivery to the production.
Ok track nice lines throughout rode the beat constant and pretty good however the ride scheme seemed to be off and on almost like a freestyle flow where the rhyming spots changed from line to line. Pretty good tone and energy
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dope shit,, really liking this. delivery is perfect. contrary to waht the others are saying about the hook, I like it. but i guess it does get a tiny bit repetitive by the end.
all in all this is very professional, i'm impressed.
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overall pretty dope, quality is good, flow is nice, lyrics are pretty good, keep em coming
peep my new track I just did with Rappin 4 Tay, let me know what you think.
thx guys, feed returned! new track comin soon! uppin for noww.
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i missed your link sorry man! doin it nowww!
light saber flow... i got the force bro....
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