Life Could Be A Bitch At Times

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  1. EL FEROS

    EL FEROS New Member

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    WE CANT NEVER BE HAPPY, CAUSE THERE'S
    SOMEBODY 2 FUCK IT UP
    I CANT BELIEVE WHAT JEALOUSY COULD DO
    ²²²²²S SO JEALOUS, TRYIN 2 BREAK US APART
    I TOLD MY SHORTY NOT 2 WORRY
    BUT THERE WASNT NOTHIN I COULD OF DONE

    SHE LEFT ME 2 PROTECT ME...
    FROM THEM
    I DIDNT NEED HER PROTECTION,ALL I NEEDED WAS LOVE

    MY LIFE FELT LIKE SHIT...
    IT WENT DOWN THE DRAIN
    I SMOKED ALL THE FLAME MY LUNGS COULD TAKE
    BUT IT WASNT ENOUGH FOR THAT LOVE I HAD
    AND STILL HAVE FOR HER

    SHE PICKED ME UP WHEN I NEEDED SOMEONE...
    WHEN SHE CAME 2 ME...
    I REGRETED DOIN ALL THE THINGS I'VE DONE
    BUT OUR LOVE WAS MUCH MORE GREATER,
    THAN THE PASSED.
    test
  2. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    strong words... nice piece.
    test
  3. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Strong, emotional piece with many powerful lines to depress you somewhat. The capital letters really felt the anger that was boiling up inside of you, which was good. Also, I think you may be speaking of 'cockblockers', who try breaking a relationship up sometimes, but also it may be other reasons, also. Anyway, nice piece, family. My blessings..
    test
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