Lies Cant Really Go On Like This My Life Cant Go On Like This I Hate This Shit. I Really Cant Take Shit I Just Snap For Anythin,i Hate It. Cant Really Go On Like This Lies Just Fuck It Up I Just Dont Like Bein Told Lies. When She Left Me It Was Really Fuck Up She Left Me For A Lie She Believed Them Not Me. What Did I Do Wrong For Her To Treat Me Like This. She Left Me And Could Never Get Her Back She's Long Gone And Can Never Catch Up I Loved Her,i Still Do. I Could Never Let Her Go. She'll Always Be In My Heart
This was an o.k. piece. No rhyme pattern, and there didn't have to be one. Your true feeling was expressed throught this written topic, and that's what made it good. *Stay up* ^One
i agree that it was a decent piece..and unlike infonation i don't think that every piece of poetry needs to have a rhyme pattern, some sourt of rythem is nice tho...and the way i was reading it i picked up a lil. once again tho...we're reading it here how we intrepret so its hard to say how the author intended it to be heard. anyways...this wasn't bad at all...in the beginning i read it in an angry way and then i sensed some resignation at the end. not too bad at all, keep droppin.
Written with a certain amoutn of rawness. This had a to the point, from the heart like feel to it... simple, yet well put. I liked it... ..resp..
I say you kick that lyin bitch in her stomach! LOl nah, on the real...this sounds like a rant you had to get off your chest...keep that shit comin'.
