"Liberate The South" (Drop links, I reply ASAP)

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  1. Rex Skully

    Rex Skully .......

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  2. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

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    this was pretty cooo....i think the flow coulda been better....but it was a cool little verse....me and you have to work together again sometime soon
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  3. Sun Tzu

    Sun Tzu The War is On

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    i thought this was wack, all the way around. the voice is corny, the flow was weak, and the lyrics were horrible.

    pretty shitty song
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  4. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin ... beats weird definently different ... Im feelin it though
    voice aint bad ... flow is off a lil bit ... you sound like Chino Xl if he had a deeper voice ...
    no offense ... this aint that bad ... dope track ...
    hit up mine

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=913630
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  5. kyILL

    kyILL Mister ILL

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    yeah.. flow is funny.. doesn't mesh very well. chorus isn't that cool imo. beat is nasty though.
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  6. Dice

    Dice Still One Of A Kind...

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    Lyrics are decent, voice doesnt match the beat as well as it could. maybe turn up the back up vocals. Might be a bad move for white boys to rap about slavery of any sort. especially in the south.

    Overall, I say cut the chorus, its kinda weak. the verse isnt as bad as others are making it out to be. I think this verse would be better on another beat, and its not really on topic. it has nothing to do with liberation, the south, or stereotypes. I think you should disect this track, and sew it up with a different beat and hook/

    Return the favor

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=915700

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  7. TheoReTiKaL

    TheoReTiKaL New Member

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    RETURNIN THE FAVOR...

    hook is funny... kinda thing u'd hear before beetlejuice or sumthin lol\

    lyrics is sometimes forced "i make flames create like..." that dont make sense.. zeros to c-notes line wuz coo tho, voice is bearable, beat is kinda corny... overall u got sum improvement to do but no worries, it will come
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