Let's Be Real...

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum, May 27, 2003.

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  1. ~S*T*A*R*M~

    ~S*T*A*R*M~ Goddess

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    [color=ffcc99]I LOVED IT!!!! Excellent. Outstanding. Exquistise, even.

    I don't even know what to say. That was so sharp. I loved it.

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    I had to come back.. this is so refreshing! Kudos!!
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  2. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    I'm glad y'all like it, but I'm very surprised at the response. I came up with the concept almost as a joke, like "what if a guy were to say at the beginning what ended up happenning at the end? What would his game be then?"
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  3. ~S*T*A*R*M~

    ~S*T*A*R*M~ Goddess

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    [color=ffcc99]Either way, you wrote it so well. It didn't seem like any joke to me.. that was a heavy poem.
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  4. DLK02

    DLK02 Cadillac Pimpin

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    That was gangsta as hell.....i like the endin...


    shit...i might jack it and call it mine.....j/p....that shit is hot though...

    now if we can get one like this from a womans perspective..
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  5. dacrumbla

    dacrumbla Crumblin n1ggas since'83

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    i have so many of those thoughts running through my head its crazy, i normally dont like to read poetry but this was on point
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  6. UnknownLady

    UnknownLady Senior Member

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    Whoa!! That is all I can say right about now. Besides that I felt the piece for cetain reasons. It had me asking myslef questions as I kept on reading it. Other than that the ish was good. Geat job. Keep it up.

    I'm Out
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  7. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    wow..no lie...this hasta be one of the best and intriguing poems i have read in a while. i love it and hate it at the same time. to me it was heavy..made you take a step back and be like whoa...what just happened here. the shock value alone is priceless lol....it was so well written, great job.
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  8. poeticJUSTICE

    poeticJUSTICE mera naam hai bond

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    wohh,

    i was mad when you said those thing about a woman... but then to just tink about how real it is...


    keep it up guy
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  9. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    Dang. I really did not expect this response. In all my four years, NO PIECE out of the hundreds I've posted have heralded such responses or numbers of replies. Usually I have to piss people off in the 'spectrum to pass 20 replies. Never has a poem done it.

    It really speaks a lot when people can relate this.
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