Lenny Blaze - Make It (Produced By DJ Tavo)

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  1. Lenny Blaze

    Lenny Blaze New Member

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    http://hitman-production.com/downloads/lennyblaze.htm

    scroll down to track 9 and find it, i dont really wana release it too much i only let that site have it and i wana see the feedback on this song, i got exclusives rights tot his song also produced by my boy dj tavo www.soundclick.com/djtavobeats if you want more drop links and i got you back

    Make it, I know that im gon make it
    Don’t care if I am hated
    third strypez yeah we gon make it
    the top is where we'll make it
    I know that im gon make it
    Don’t care if I am hated
    third strypez yeah we gon make it
    the top is where we'll make it

    im hungry enough to eat emcees
    in freestyles i unleash the beast
    never lose no battles i dont see defeat
    im gon reach the top just me and my team
    just feed me the green im greedy and keen
    im a nice emcee yet im street and im mean
    i cheat to win, i dont play by the rules
    yall standin still while im makin some moves
    i got an appetite and im cravin for food
    i win so much that yall pray that i lose
    i gotta watch out for the snakes that move
    third strypez for life cant replace my crew
    i dont take no orders aint a slave or fool
    im gettin known i wont be strange to you
    and i dont do what the lames would do
    i harm the fakes bringin pain aint new

    im slowly steadily climbin up
    if i say i'll rip you i aint the kind to bluff
    so many fakes its hard findin trust
    and grindins tuff when you aint in clubs
    some ppl so blind and mistake i suck
    and its hard if theres more hate than love
    dont wana live broke gettin cakes a must
    with music i created a buzz
    ready for war my boys im backin up
    im reppin my set til my caskets shut
    yall cats are slow its like you fat or somethin
    cuz its a race to the top and you aint fast enough
    ppl front like they hard sayin caps they bust
    but in reality they holdin plactic guns
    aint a father but watch your ass get sonned
    cuz i'll smoke you out til i have no lungs
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  2. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    switched browsers n got the player workin..
    hook is kinda eehh... verses were coo...lyrically they were kinda simple to me,but thats based on my personal taste..the flow was koo tho..delivery was ight...ya voice was kinda mellow but u did ya thing..overall this was coo..the quality was coo,understandable...a coo drop..keep up the music
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  3. TWO M.C.S

    TWO M.C.S New Member

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    eewww little heads up - that site buffers REALLY bad for me - worse than ole iuma and shit lol - beats pretty hard though, synthed out

    man production soundin nice and clean - crisp - hooks pretty decent - reasonably catchy - you comin pretty nice with the flow, lyrics could be a bit more complex - thats really all i can critique homie - this a good one, could hear this bumpin at a party and shit

    keep it slap!
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  4. Lenny Blaze

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  5. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    not bad at all nice lil anthem type shits not bad verses nice and hook only thing u could do is add more emotion with this type of beat u should pull some dmx energy haha but its nice keep em bangin homie stay up
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  6. Lenny Blaze

    Lenny Blaze New Member

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    thanx uppin
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  7. Lenny Blaze

    Lenny Blaze New Member

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    i replied to more links than this!!
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  8. ExodusIII

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    yeah but it's not always fair game on this site...i'm returning the favour

    beat's cool...i like that synthed out shit...

    you sound like you're kinda new to rappin...lyrics were kinda simple...no amazing wordplay or anything but it was still str8...

    flow was good...but needs to be polished somewhat...it's not as fluid as it could be...so my critique would be that you should keep spittin n get that flow down...nice n fluid...cause you're kinda leaning on the beat....i'm not sure how to explain it...but it's like you're not pacing your words well with the beat...so you have to compensate for that at points = a bit of a robotic flow...

    just keep spittin...you'll get that flow just right
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    Lenny Blaze New Member

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    wheres the other ppl at? i replied to a lot of threads!
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    ............
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