lemme introduce myself

Discussion in 'Introduce Yourself' started by Hananward, Dec 31, 2013.

  1. Hananward

    Hananward Hananthemakavelirevolutionary

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    Well I'm Hanan and umm I'm from Ireland a friend introduced me to tupac shakur and his music has been a religion to me ever since. I think rapping she be about real stuff like whats happening in the world today.

    This is my rap about what listening to 2pac taught me. Its my first one.

    Fuck the haters imma let em go but when im on top imma let you know, you aint got no reason to be hatin imma be a niggah you have faith in. I listened to his music like it was religion, brought me up from the dark place my heart was hidden. Wonderin what mah gonna do next a load of hurt and pain runnin through mah chest. When I listened I just knew tupac was the only one who rapped shit that was true. A niggah who said how it is e'rrbody dies but not everybody lives. He taught me there's more to a career that there's people on the streets starving hungry but niggahs in the game all they want is the jewels the houses money. I don't understand why niggahs have 3 houses when a brutha have none. One day the bruthas will rise from the ground ain't nobody to tell them that hope cant be found. So let a niggah tell you how he Feeli. Don't rap about shit rap bout what is real

    Comments on improvement would be helpful :)
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  2. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    You should post these in the text side for good feedback. Welcome tho
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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    first, you gotta make it easier on the read. break up the lines.

    Fuck the haters imma let em go
    but when im on top imma let you know
    you aint got no reason to be hatin
    imma be a niggah you have faith in


    so on and so forth. but word, post shit in the open mic and you may get more feedback. that part of the site is pretty slow though.
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  4. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    Welcome to RM.. :) Delicious treats await..

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  5. Sin Skywalker

    Sin Skywalker #184 Gladiator.

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    Welcome to RM.com. You record at all or just write?
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  6. Hananward

    Hananward Hananthemakavelirevolutionary

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    Just write I have nothing to record with
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  7. Sin Skywalker

    Sin Skywalker #184 Gladiator.

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    Got you. Well hopefully you find something to record with. In the mean time keep working on your writing!
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  8. QueenHoney

    QueenHoney Miss RapMsuci <3

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    welcome to the site beautiful
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