Laying Down Stuff

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by bagglad, Apr 11, 2011.

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  1. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    Laying Down Stuff

    Write rhymes that leave a bright shine on
    Papers with strong vapors my dome tapers along
    With my mind , cats be sad and dense with a bad sense
    This rouse desires that set house on fires I’m convinced
    Even a Mickey Mouse want cheese, please squeeze Velveeta
    The whack is fake I’ attract with bait then attack their leader’s
    Fate, have them calling my name and ctawling for fame
    While balling doing cocaine, should be oiling their brain
    My menu is to rap and lure cats into a trap too late then
    win Battles I ride in twin saddles like the Lone Ranger again
    there’s strong danger I may become a cowboy so lend
    me your ear, look this rap is a wiry affair and it’s leaving
    a fiery glare in my eyes for me spitting fire is breathing
    I’m a soldier hot that’s over the top in HIPHOP filled
    Beyond capacity builds lawns with tenacity and killed
    Ants with insecticides and wreck their prides to the point
    They won’t eat crops I defeat a lot of them when I anoint
    My grass, got and amazing plan to make my yard like grazing
    Land and become a master of a pasture after using miracle grow
    And let my lyricals flow through the fescue let my cereals glow
    Love cornflakes, weeds pollute grounds while I shoot down birds
    Recruit clowns and nerds just to battle with, use nouns and words
    To defend myself my blend is deft like fresh coffee Hummer swerve
    Around curves, my messy art hits the fleshy part of brains make nerves
    Twitch, pure put it on microphones be sure- footed and unknown
    energetic minds can only write sympathetic rhymes some strong
    for mad crews I’m bad news because my brain burn with slang
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  2. HEAVYHITTAZ

    HEAVYHITTAZ MA$$ DEZTRUCTION

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    nice wordplay ...but peep this
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  3. HEAVYHITTAZ

    HEAVYHITTAZ MA$$ DEZTRUCTION

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    Killa style nigga

    u cats run when the tech smoke/ its heavy hittaz niggah we comin at ya neck like a strep throat/when i spit, rhymes get deeper/bars come thru and put u right in a sleeper/just so u know , im my guns keeper/ protection strapped on the hip like a beeper/theas no paper here for u what u chasin/ my niggahs touch more paper than WB mason/ its heavy hittaz niggah smokin that bag of dour clean/ bums got there hands at their neck like powder feinds/one swing ima hit it out the park/ rhymes thru the mic blood thirsty like a shark/ u know the night gets colder than i spark/betta collect ya thoughts before i leave em for the cops/goin flawless i aint gon stop/at the back spot flow like a crack rock/aint endin til my tracks flop/ young niggahs will be 80 in the hospital gettin surgery cuz their back popped! HEAVY HITTAZ call me MA$$ DEZTRUCTION
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  4. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    yo what up bag good shit son u should leave the mickey mouse part out next time but other than that this was kool stay up
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  5. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    Thanks for the response and props on this for real
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  6. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    sic wordplay and mutis ... i like what you did .... not bad at all for just layin it down lol
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  7. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    thanks for the props on this one for real
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