Late dispatch recieved, friend.

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by IssphitiKOzS, Nov 11, 2010.

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  1. IssphitiKOzS

    IssphitiKOzS Avalanche

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    Buoyant amongst inexorable ether
    You, transient drifter, submerged in stardust, waved
    Enthralled by the ocean's glimmer, we all have sand in our eyes//
    test
  2. Mikaella Ocean

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  3. IssphitiKOzS

    IssphitiKOzS Avalanche

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    haha

    Subliminal
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  4. Mikaella Ocean

    Mikaella Ocean Well-Known Member

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    why did you edit?
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    Can't remember the original anymore, but I remember editing it because it explained too blatantly what you said "word up" to.

    And I live for subtlety.
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  6. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    This is my type of poem.

    "Enthralled by the ocean's glimmer, we all have sand in our eyes"

    That's going in my sig...
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