KRazy... vs. MR. freeze

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by KRayz..., Jan 10, 2011.

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  1. KRayz...

    KRayz... New Member

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    shits only 8 lines but i think there better than anything he could produce and i know im new im not doing this to get known he just pisses me off with his shit lyrics


    ill blow you off your pedestal and bring heat like pyrotecnics/
    then they'll find your body in deep FREEZE like kryogenics

    mista freeze thinks hes on the top but hes about to slip/
    are you trying to rap battle or write a fucking script

    mentions being a king and a god just how many times/
    shame with all that power he cant produce better lines

    your lines arnt cold there maybe luke warm at best/
    but i bet that felt like a snow storm just hit you in the chest
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  2. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Your opener is nice,son...but you fell off from there.Hopefull you and FREEZE get in more than a one rounder because all he has to do is write 10 strong bars and he'll take you because you didn't maintain the savagery of your opening bar-couplette,imho.

    Btw,it's spelled "Cryogenics"...but props for having the knowledge and skill to use that subject as a punchline!
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  3. HeartCloaker

    HeartCloaker Winter is coming

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    Lines 1 2 4 and 5 were good, but Freeze is going to win because the other lines sucked and Freeze is going to have more bars. Unless if he no-shows, then go KRayz...
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  4. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    *FREEZE just shakes his Head*

    WOW! That's all I have 2 say....

    KRAYZ lines wouldnt be "SWEET" if they came in SUGAR LACED PACKETS/
    His rhyme scheme is so simplistic. It's KRAYZ 2 feel I can't "STRAIGHT JACKET"/

    See FREEZE has been known 2 cause "WRECK" like no brakes on a RENTAL VAN/
    While KRAYZ's skillz R non existant like a ENGLISHMAN with a DENTAL PLAN/

    KRAYZ I have this locked like an ASYLUM. My verses are tucked with Malice/
    And I fucked your Girl for a FEE. She gave me "BUCK IN HAND" (BUCKINGHAM) in my "PALACE"/

    Her LONDON BRIDGES came falling down but here's what'll make U go off and be sad/
    I called in all my Guys from the CELTICS and we took turns giving her "BOSTON TEA BAGS"/

    *FREEZE just sighs*

    Okay I don't know who put U up 2 this but REALLY this was not that HOTT!!! Not being mean but U can't attack someone with 8 semi- decent bars and think U can win! I honestly thought this was going 2 be a dis from HEART CLOAKER who I plan 2 beat up again soon so imagine how DISAPPOINTED I was! Anyway if U want 2 retort U can be I don't see the POINT! I REALLY AM BETTER THAN U! How about U beat a couple other Kids first then come back okay...

    THIS I COMMAND!!!

    Feel the FREEZE!!!
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  5. PeskyPete

    PeskyPete New Member

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    Freeze, im English, but your shits funny! Made me lol XD
    EXCEPT the thing with buckingham dont make sence because americans seem to pronounce it very differently to people here. But yeah thats purely a "text-Only" problem, and besides, you would run rings round me in a battle :)
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  6. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    See FREEZE has been known 2 cause "WRECK" like no brakes on a RENTAL VAN/
    While KRAYZ's skillz R non existant like a ENGLISHMAN with a DENTAL PLAN/

    Bodybag shit right there.
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