Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by KnightMere, Sep 27, 2005.
uppin for the youngin'
Got'damnit, will someone give this child a happy meal, so he will log the fuck off, head to his girls house, and tear the linin out her gordita smellin puss?
Great song, yadda yadda... are you still readin this son?
Why arent you out hittin that fuckin chalupa pussita already?
aiight, good shit son,, quality is good, flow is on point, though i would've like you to switch up the scheme here and there, it was straight, shit was nicely done, beat was heavy, like that, •••••s is sleeping on this, shiiiiiiiit, but you'll get replys,
^^thanks for the feed man...appreciate it
bumpin....cmon on peeps
Wasn't really feelin it. After you rhymed rap for about the fifth time I turned it off. Not just cus the lyrics, because the way you delivered em too, the talk smack line is offbeat. Work on your syllablization too man.
I turned it back on to give you a decent chance. Verse 2: You should really work on better lyrics man, so you can switch your flow up, stead of saying name and game over and over. I don't know, just wasnt feelin it man. Stay up tho.
Thanks for the feed anyway tho man...i am workin on my rhyme structure and i do tend to use alot of the same words..and im not sure what you ment when you said the "talk smack line was off beat"....but overall i really appreicate the feed man you actually took the time the listen...thanks
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