Kinda Dirty:

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  1. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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  2. _REAPAH_

    _REAPAH_ Mello Dee

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    aight

    "Co FLo"

    Intro is some mad simple nolia clap type shit.... It starts feeling a bit african abstract when the shit kicks in..... Okay, unless your making a track about a nightmare, this aint good... Percussion is straight but the mellody shouldnt even be there for all that... Get some new samples.

    Had to peep the second beat...

    "Anti Internet"
    ITs better, but not that good... You really should invest in a sample CD.... The sampling is good, but you left it too naked... nothing over it, just hi hats, bass and kick... Too abstract for me tho, im into the tribe called quest type of abstract, the common type of abstract...

    Not really feelin either one of em, keep workin tho.
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  3. MagickB3ats

    MagickB3ats Owns

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    Iight, here's yo review.

    Co. Flow Say So- Mix those instruments in yo intro, and when the melody drops, ain't feelin' it too much. Too much abrupt noises, you should really find yo self some better samples? Not my style of track, so for me, I give this a 5/10.

    Anti-Internet- Once again, find yo-self some samples, ain't feelin' this beat either. Sounds like a chord stab played in different pitches, and stabs/samples with chords hardly ever work out on a beat, work on this one too mayne. 5.5/10.

    Work on those, I see potential in yo music.

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  4. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    Ooooweeee, hope no one took offense to the 2nd title!
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  5. wmsproductions

    wmsproductions wms productions

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  6. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    Co. Flow.. ahh.. intro is coo.,, some abstract impressionistic shit.. drops nice... great track to spit freestyles of any kind over... melody could be a little louder, the scary sound that drops later... im not sure how i feel about it... but overall i like this beat, mostly for experimentalism.. u switched up a lot since last time i peeped ur beats

    Anti-Internet.. aw i can tell this gonna be gangsta.. intro is cool.... daaaaaammmmm drop nice as hell... drums are flawless, nice job pickin the set.. piano is grimy as hell melody is on point. likin those chords.. the hook is dope

    Beats Life.. intro leaves me not knowin what to expect, i kinda hate that kick, up until it drop.... melody grimy... this needs to be mastered differently in my opinion.. and snare could be switched up..

    overall real dope beats especially that internet joint!!!

    hit me up at

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=811295

    good beats really feelin ya style
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  8. sickbeatz

    sickbeatz More bodies being burried

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  9. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    Glad I peeped yours before commenting on this thread. I don't even need to comment.....MAYBE I WILL! When you get hair on your nuts and peachfuzz on your chin, THEN you can talk sh*t. Until then, stop making me laugh AT YOU and your mickey mouse beats!!!!!!!!
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  10. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    Ok.......
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  11. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    Any more?
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  12. Enginear1

    Enginear1 Im Back

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    wow. horrid.
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  13. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    n e way,...............
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  14. Mellow Madness

    Mellow Madness aKa sTaTiK

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    co flo - i like the intro.. but the vox/pad.. is way to loud.. drowns out the whole beat.. drums r very thick.. you should rework ur mixing .. and add other elements.. and u should be aight..

    anti - that sample is pretty dope.. i like the drums.. and snare.. i dunno y but i could see mobb deep on this.. grimy.. feeling this one more than the first..

    keep growing


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  15. Cicc CEL

    Cicc CEL R & B - Rhymes & Beats

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    Where did you get the piano bell sample? what is that? I wish I had that shit.
    the beat is tight. I see where you are tryin to take it. some of the shit sound off like the snare at the end where you double up. not hatin or nothin.
    just lettin you know what i hear.
    the bassline is sick, i see where you taken it. this would be rappable if it was faster wit some more headbobbin drums.

    keep bangin em out cuzzin

    what is that bell'/piano sample?
    lol send me that shit we' can trade
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  16. Und3rw0rlD

    Und3rw0rlD two blunts and a mic

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    Peepin' anti internet first Im diggin these drums, melodies hot stays on beat... definately an MC friendly beat I see people smokin' blunts n cyphering to this... hotness

    Co Flow - likin the intro... could be mixed better tho... Nice drums... wierd piano sample but it serves its purpose.... liked the beat drop, cuts back in smooth... nice... I liked Anti Internet better tho... thanks for hittin my thread... pz
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  17. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    It's in the sample. I'll hit you with the name of the sample when I get a chance.
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  18. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    Thanks again.
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  20. Skwirm

    Skwirm Soul Mechanix Beats

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    Beat Life,
    This is dirty. Where'd you samp this from. I'm always try'n to find new grittier places to sample(8 track, reel to reel). Yeah I like this it's raw as fuck but I think it's got potential. It does sound that you pitch shifted it out of tune. I like those raw drums you dropped. Not bad.
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=812585
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