Keystyle By Misskey..it's Been A While So Please Peep!!!!

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  1. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    Before love
    Before confusion and tension there was
    careless nights
    warm whispers
    playful touches
    I remember cuddling in your arms watchin movies
    massaging fingertips with my lips
    as you moved your hands along my hips

    Before love
    It was only a dream
    Unshared
    uncared
    no desire to prolong
    no saddening love songs
    no waiting by the phone
    not caring if I was alone

    Before love
    I truly didn't care
    never was aware of how much you'd mean to me
    Now love is there
    And love is true
    It's left both of us not knowing what to do

    keystyle by MISSKEYDAQUEEN
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  2. Urizen

    Urizen Guest

    *whipes tear away*

    YEAH I hate love it fucks you up

    nice keystyle tho nice poem
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  3. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    thanks boo!! I appreciate th feed back!!
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  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    havent seen u in here in a minute

    whats good?

    like this piece u got right here

    real easy flow to it....been rightin shit like this alot lattely

    think its cause i listen to the slow jams channel comin home from

    work everyday...lol....keep doing your thang...upin for ya
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  5. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    ya know..it has been a minute..I've been doing songs recently..but I been wanting to drop a few in here..ya know..

    Thanks for the feedback!
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  6. the.dirtiest

    the.dirtiest inactive

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    nice drop, very real. love is great but that drama is horrible. you captured that in between dilemma perfectly. stay strong ma.
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  7. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    The last piece i read played similar chords to this one...which makes it kind of hard i guess...

    ...the essence captured in such a beautifully 'up and down' way...though never will i, that is me through my senses, feel that a piece can come near to depicting 'it'...

    ...there are many out there, that..well....play the chords...hit the notes...

    this was more of a 'though' piece, you know, a bit 'cooler'...and less raw in a sense...

    ...i got nothing more to say...i think you get the picture...a very well executed piece that was fairly pure in what it was about...

    ...resp...
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  8. unspoken1

    unspoken1 Revolutionary Wordsmen

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    wow....that is probably one of the best ive read of late...nicely done
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  9. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    cOOL...GLAD YOU ALL LIKE IT.

    I'll make sure I look out for all of your work!
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  10. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    I'm noticing a trend here in the Realm....it seems like more and more people are "keystyling" and it's coming across better than a lot of premeditated writing. As for this particular joint I like how it was borderline sensual in the beginning....just sensual enough to get the imagination started. That was real slick.
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  11. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    "I remember cuddling in your arms watchin movies
    massaging fingertips with my lips
    as you moved your hands along my hips"


    This was artwork in a form of pen techniques. I loved the smooth ongoing flow of this piece, it basically hit my tongue line for line. Nice list of non-existant items and topics before love, such as no desire, or anything else. I felt as if you came out with some true emotion and something that was buried in your heart. Something that needed to get out and this helped. A definite read on further visits, I must say. My blessings..
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  12. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    before love......yip, things always seem so much simpler before love, im sure many people can relate to this, real nice piece but especially love the middle section, the whole no desire, not caring if you were alone part, nice touch.
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  13. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    This is cool! It seems like the people who are peeping this are real poets cause they pop in and really give feedback and they don't just say...it's cool now read mine!!

    LOL

    I appreciate all the feedback...stress and work have prevented me from droppin much...but the feedback is helping a lot. I hope this helps someone!

    Peace!
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  14. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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  15. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    I LUV THA qUEEN..... sHE'S Sooo Real like colorado springs cold raindrops..
    !!She so Cold baby...!!



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