Kaveh - Lock-Down (FreeVerse) **Drop Links!!**

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  1. kaveh

    kaveh New Member

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    yo peep this track!!.. No Adlibs yet!.. I got sick the day before i recorded this, have sore throat.. So this will be Re-Recorded ASAP.. this is more of a "FreeVerse" for now, until i feel better and re-record it

    eney feeback would me much appreciated.. Drop Links!!

    www.soundclick.com/kaveh7
    "Lock-Down (FreeVerse)

    http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2684355&q=Lo
    http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2684355&q=Hi
    http://www.soundclick.com/util/downloadSong.cfm?ID=2684355

    Lyrics - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/Lyrics.cfm?BandID=240285&songid=2684355
    test
  2. BestMove

    BestMove New Member

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    aight the beat starts off kinda dope - ok when this started i thought you were talking - it sounds like you havent been rapping very long - ya flow is pretty good but it sounds unnatural - the lyrics were good but when ur delivery isnt that dope it doesnt make anything stand out - keep rapping - the more you do it the more natural your flow n delivery become

    link:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=911908
    test
  3. kaveh

    kaveh New Member

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    yeh no doubt.. im only 15 and been doin audios for about 5 months now..
    i was tryna put more emotion and shit, but since i was sick.. i couldnt get much out, my throat was killin me lol

    thanks for the feed, i got the link now!
    test
  4. Q V C

    Q V C I Will Murk You

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    this is nice man, you keep improving yo.. keep up with that shit
    test
  5. Thugsicle

    Thugsicle The Realdeal

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    beat is nice...flow is strait...off in a few spots...nice production...delivery...nice too...keep it up...good looks on the song
    test
  6. kaveh

    kaveh New Member

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    no doubt, thanks for the feed man! much appreciated
    test
  7. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    i rocked this beat also..if you wanna hear.. www.soundclick.com/neruk

    got pretty good quality, flow is alright, a bit choppy.. when the beat switches up why the pause?? and then end randomly before the hook hits??

    overall this is descent.. i would wait until a song is finished before you drop it thou.. just my opinion.. drop a link in my thread when this is done and i will re-listen
    test
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