Kaotic - On The Verge (ft Mike Bontempi) DROP YOUR LINKS!!!

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  1. Kaotic33

    Kaotic33 Owns You

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  2. BLooDSHoTT

    BLooDSHoTT R.I.P. Point Game

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    beats aight .. too slow of a tempo for me to bump to

    quality is straight .. flow is on point and all too .. chorus is good im feelin dat singing typa shit .. lyrics is all real talk props on it ..

    coo joint .. keep at it but on some real stay away from relationships until u outta college its a waste of time and does nothin but stress u out
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  3. Fallen

    Fallen www.FallenHipHop.com

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    beats alright... flow's on point... delivery could use a bit of work though... need to get more into it... more emotional... especially with this type of track... hook's dope... I'm feelin that...

    quality and all that are dope...

    lyrics are some real shit... hopefully shits turned around for you...
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  4. TraGiC

    TraGiC Recognize Real

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    Beat is hot...my type of steez...

    this definitely nice homie for your first solo song...getting some shit off ya chest...feelin that shit

    hahha I really dig that chorus man...is that you??????

    very nice dog...

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  5. SadistiK1

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    Aighty, running commentary... Beat is ok, kinda soundclicky to me, but not bad. Your voice is cool, I likes. Lyrically, I like how it sounds honest and not on some dumb bullshit, but rhyme wise its nothing really groundbreaking. Your flow is ok, but it sounds a little bit awkward. " I can tell its fine but actually its NOT" would be an example, the way you enunciate certain words seems a bit awkward to me. Not feelin the hook much, the ideas there but the dude cant really sing to me :( .

    Overall your voice is a strongpoint and I like that the song sounds honest, it just needs polish on your end and the singers in my opinion, but thats something that comes with time. hopefully that helps ahha
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  6. Kaotic33

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  7. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin ,

    beats ok , flow was aight had some meaning in this , youve elevated since last time i hard you , Hook was sick i was feelin it , 2nd verse comin just as hard
    not bad yo i was feelin it
    get at my new shit
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1031790

    -Kamikaze Lyricist
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  8. TWO M.C.S

    TWO M.C.S New Member

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    damn homie - m bad, thought i had gotten at this already - i think your natural tempo is alslightly faster than tihs one from the sound of it - but you brought it - and the hook is stand out 4 sure

    nice work!

    keep it slappin!
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  9. Battlefields

    Battlefields Swaggin' On You

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    chorus is cool first verse is cool not feeling the flow though chorus remind me of panic at the disco real talk second verse sam e as second verse with flow this could use some mixing quality is ehhh third verse sam flow

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1034590
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  10. KnightMere

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    yoo..i gave u feed back on aim..for this track..sick shit man..keep it up
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  11. Kaotic33

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    got all your links back
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