KamikazeLyricist, Und3rw0rld, Drips1, & PastOne - "The Cypher Pt 2" - Drop Links

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  1. Und3rw0rlD

    Und3rw0rlD two blunts and a mic

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  2. killa_bone

    killa_bone New Member

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    Beats pretty nasty..

    1st verse pretty good, 2nd verse pretty much the same... like the little bits inbetween the verses, blow his shirt away like that line.... you dont want another round yeah.. 3rd verse good shit...ok 4th verse...like the switch to a faster flow in bits there, all verses were decent hard to say who ripped it more, pretty much all on the same level.

    Nice tight track lads.

    Here's mine: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979094

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  3. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  4. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    listening

    the beat is fiyah its some real gangsta shit...

    1st - haha i liked the way that shit started..caught my attention from the jump..i like this dude..he got a lot of personality in his verse..the bomb shit was cool..im feeling this

    2nd- got more of a emcee feel on his verse..flow and delivery was good..lyrics was a killing it..real gangsta with his shit.

    3rd haha at vertabrae line..u got that swagger on this track..u riding the beat a lil better then the other 2..you got a different voice 2..i like this

    4th-volume is a lil lower on his verse..but i like the fast rapping in the middle parts that added another dimension to his verse...flow was ok..delivery was really good

    all in all a solid verse..real diverse i likes that

    9/10

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  5. M.Maestro

    M.Maestro Ghost

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    beat is cool.

    first cat reminds me of royce da 59... and i remember tellin u this before. dont blatantly copy, borrow and revolutionize.. thats the key to formin ya own style - verse still cool


    second dude -

    flow is on point, lyrics are straight.. it really didn't catch me but the flow is straight


    third cat.

    flow sounds like the second dude.. but his emotion seperates him from the last dude. lyrics are cool


    overall - its a pretty straight tracks, you all still need polishing though.

    7/10

    keep elevatin

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979616
    peep and hoffa.
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  6. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    royce 5'9 on this ? weird I couldnt see that at all and i never attempted to sound like him so its whatevas thanx for the feed we'll get all the links

    -Kamikaze Lyricist ð
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  7. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    im feeling this beat ...its not...


    first--im feeling this shit...the delivery is nice as hell, im feeling this.... the lyrics are nice for the gangsta type feel i get it from....the rhyme scheme is nice....everything bout this verse is nice as hell....nice drop...


    second--this voice is decent....im feeling the delivery its nice too....the lyrics are there...still that gangsta type feel but its nice...the rhyme scheme is decent im feeling this verse..


    third--im feeling this delivery too...the lyrics are pretty nice....rhyme scheme is there...


    fourth--this is nice.....im feeling the voice and delivery....nice lyrics...this is a nice drop in general...


    you all killed this track....nice drop....


    rtf on I Never Listened------Prophecy
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  8. past one

    past one New Member

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    good looks
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  9. Great Trojan

    Great Trojan *More Heart than Rome*

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    multi's were hott on first verse..........dont agree wit that gun talk, but as far as writing this was cool........flow was cool, emotion was on point.

    that pause between verses was weird.

    2nd verse........

    multi's were fire as well....take yer necklace line was plaaaaaaaaayyed.

    you guys can rhyme but ya gotta get off that wanna be gangster bullshit. you aint takin nobody's necklace and never pulled no trigger.

    like i say

    "everyone says they're shootin people, but the bodies aint addin up" - - quote me.
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  10. Und3rw0rlD

    Und3rw0rlD two blunts and a mic

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    yes because dzks really crawled thru the intestants of a cyborg bionic machine... or ate his way out of a pile of babys upon birth... and big L really killed four people for 2 million n cash and a couple of kilos... maybe you didnt get the memo but music is "Entertainment"

    upped....
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  11. past one

    past one New Member

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    upingggggggg
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  12. Und3rw0rlD

    Und3rw0rlD two blunts and a mic

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    just hit all links... upped...
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  13. M.Maestro

    M.Maestro Ghost

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    Ive studied royce, yes studied him. I know the trademark royce/eminem flows they they use.. and I heard em in ya track.

    Just my opinion tho.
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  14. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    you said you heard Royce now you say Em weird
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  15. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    1st dude-speakin clearly...delivery is good..flow is ight ..lyrics was ight...nuffin that really had me in aww...but u was good...no flaws really
    2nd dude-this dudes basicly the same as the first....comin the same except his voice is deeper
    3rd dude-i like this dude,delivery is good..and his voice is a good listen...comin a lil diff then the dudes before him which is good..lyrics was nice too..a few hot lines
    4th dude- flow is hot..lol...coming wit it...sum hot lines in there

    overall this was good...it woulda been better if the lil clip of them spitten sumthin was fitting better...it was a good idea but sounded out of place....overall this was giood tho...`1

    return the feed here.... http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979823
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  16. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx for the feedback
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  17. past one

    past one New Member

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    upinggggggggggggggg
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  18. Und3rw0rlD

    Und3rw0rlD two blunts and a mic

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    thanks for the feed fuckers...
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  19. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    lol...............................ð
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  20. Vise

    Vise Ya Tu Sabes

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    1st guy was spittin.... angry ass style, hahaha. i like it though. nice flow and what not.

    2nd kid came in and kept the pace goin with a nice flow and delivery.

    3rd person wtf...i oouldn't even make this guy out....wow, that was strange.....


    4th emcee came in with a double time flow.....nice shit and what not. i fuckz with his verse.


    aside from the third verse, which i could not even make out, i woulda liked to have heard a real chorus on this....otehr than that, this shit was pretty solid.



    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13524269#post13524269

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