Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by MarQuise*, Dec 16, 2004.
the cow god muja puja kuja is calling, OAAAAAAAAM!
I like the peice. Very vivid description with something as simple as a kiss. Suddely I feel room for error haha. (which is why there are so many bad kissers?)
one of my favorite lines and the imagery attached is
"Your hands trace my hips
I work my way down using my lips"
^that is nice right there.
good piece. short and sweet
Let me jus say a big thank you to every1 who left this poem feed, i Lv the fact you all came in here and peepd my poem, and dropped feed, much appreciated...
Thanx, and im glad that ya'll were feeling it, im happy =) my writing made ya'll think a lil, and im glad it was descriptive enuf to create images in your head...
I dont like to give much about myself away, but i guess i let go with this one...
I dont mind pourin my heart out on a poem, but i guess when it comes to 'sensual' things such as this, i felt a lil weary...
Much Lv to every1...
much luv to you too...
Im taking it that youre a glad person... according to how many times you said "im glad"
*Check ya rep* (TooShort21)
its like that
well since this is really the only way I can show you my appreciation!!
NO need fot the thanx...
Nah wud like to hit up a collabo wit you one time...
Jus coz i like the fact that you made a comment on females 'havin their shit 2gether'
You know us females run things lol...
oh... is that why!! lol
well then, im all ears for the collab.. there's only one condition
you have to write your piece first, simply because I want to feed of of your piece... I think it would be more "appropiate"!
who run this... marquise!! lol
lol all ears for a acollabo but not a general convo!
Well i jus got back in to writing again, after a VERY long break, so im rusty... but ima be droppin a new KeyStyle in the realm soon...
Jus completed it last nite...
anywayz, for now im out...
Hit me up when you can =)
Pe@cE 'n' Lv
fo sure... you are officially my favorite female poet... its been a long time coming!! lol
Ive read almost all your pieces.. mmkay
Ill hit you up fo sure
btw.... we can have a general convo if you must!!!! lol
nah im just playing, you're probably twice as interesting as I give you credit for!!! just joking)
yes... this was pretty and nice, and overall kind of sappy yet at the same time beautiful...
i just thought i'd jump on the bandwagon, and give this a little feed.
nah, i'm just playin... this deserved a reply...
stay up, keep droppin
^my ~~~~~ tyrant, hows it going brudah.
chillin doggy, how are you?
i'll check out one of your poems and leave some feed... try to return the favor when u can.
this was sweet....reminded me of my first REAL kiss...the passion with the detail took the reader into this poem....really good job
peep your Private Messager
PEACE AND GODBLESS
very descritpive and beautiful poem. i liked the flow and feel of it. i always like your work. very tight stay up.
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