Just a freewrite.

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by J Keeper, Jun 5, 2010.

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  1. J Keeper

    J Keeper Super Jesus

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    There's been a long gap between,
    Rap and me, for little bit, I'm back on beat,
    Gotta smash whack rappers like I'm mashin' beets,
    Gotta blast right past ya, too fast for peeps,
    Too bad you lack all I have, the means,
    The speech, clean as rats, ya I'm that unclean,
    I'm that one being, I'm that up-seeing,
    You'll need ya sunscreen to react on me,
    Too phat for molds, dude cracks ya bones,
    Blue backs, blue face, blew back ya dome,
    Cool cat, ya know, but I'll flip for a ring,
    Split lips, quick wit similar things,
    Fuck a biscuit, I'm givin' 'em gravy,
    Sittin' with ladies,
    You would give ya left nut, to sit with and stay with,
    But you messed up, now you're sittin' on pavement,
    Wishin' you could get up, but ya ligament's hangin',
    It just got serious,
    Cuz here he is, appearing in delirous mysterium,
    His weirdness is endearing us, he keeps on getting clearer son,
    Let's hear it, let us cheer again, let's hear it for the weird again,
    Cuz I'm just that nice, I am fuck-ing tight,
    Like I was smashin' on a virgin all fuck-ing night,
    Wond'ring why, any dude with some headphones,
    Bumps these guys, they got the music of deaf folks,
    I fuck-ing sigh, but get one thing right,
    I'm the best, all the rest, just something nice,
    test
  2. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    dude this was dope. gettin crazy slept on.

    nice broken scheme on this. great flow. dude we gotta collab, I'll pm you with some ideas I'm plottin for an audio. not sure if you lay it down on tracks, but we can do this up on txt if you want.
    test
  3. J Keeper

    J Keeper Super Jesus

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    ^Sure thing, you already know brother.
    test
  4. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Yeah I didn't catch this one ... nice freewrite though .. u killed it
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    test
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