[JUNK] Official Garbage Bin

Discussion in 'RBL TOP 20' started by Lettuce Balls, Jul 1, 2008.

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  1. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    put cock in meee...
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  2. Wes Seneca

    Wes Seneca New Member

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    ok i did too
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  3. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    has any one heard of livio?
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  4. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Uppng for votez!
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  5. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Im dumb for sayng, that u compared Gsus "lyrically" to Talib Kweli? I ddnt say u compared, Gsus to Talib lyrically. I said, comparing Gsus to Talib AT ALL is stupid. He's 1 of the greatest lyricist ever. I know u were refering Gsus to Talib's lil brother, but the problem wth it is ud assume he would b able to spit to bcz of Talib. That was jst a dumb diss.. thn u had the nerve to post a pic of Talib at the end.... thought u werent comparing? Thatz like sayng, Muhammad Ali gota daughter that cant fight.... LAILAH will knock u out!!!
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  6. xstatic

    xstatic New Member

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    i think iambent isn't getting the love here. his stuff may be too over the top for some of you. there's a lot of references that just may be skipping. taking nothing away from gsus, because his stuff was fire, but if you heard these verses out loud you'd be more blown away from Bent's words.

    just sayin.

    PS: i hate giving dude credit because he ripped me last week. haha
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  7. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    his last bars was fire...the flow was kinda off...but the concepts and shit was on point....but overall his verse wasnt consistent enough...now if he had've kept that type of lyricism the whole way through, he might would have won....real talk
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  8. Wes Seneca

    Wes Seneca New Member

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    i actually feel hated on
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  9. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Uppping for votes

    6-1 GSus

    I hope we get the most votes this week cuz we posted before everyone! LOL
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  10. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    LMMFAO.....

    good match too all!
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  11. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    I honestly don't care who you vote for, but there were 3 gay lines in my verse, and nothing was personal about it.


    Oh and LP is definitely the most emotional voter in the league. But yea, looks like you got it hens.
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  12. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    High life faggots

    @petesburgsteala hit me up
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  13. Ion Metatron

    Ion Metatron I Punch Faces 4 Fun

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    Up for votes...
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  14. TheIlliterate

    TheIlliterate Well-Known Member

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    hahaha some funny shit man, i'll try and drop tonight
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  15. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Tag battles you go 12 and have 2 people to aim at. I'll go 20 then. Not gonna use the wife pic, since you don't have any pics to use.
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  16. TheIlliterate

    TheIlliterate Well-Known Member

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    Thanks man, great review.
    I'm interested in your feedback (as well as the others') having to do with what is and isn't dope. I'm a spoken word poet (been writing for a few years now) and so delivery is my primary focus during the bar-writing process. With proper delivery the last 4 bars could have came across well and hit hard had I actually recited this verse in person and not through text.

    There was some shit that I thought was filler like the Subway line-- which I considered removing all together-- however, judging by your reactions you thought that as one of the better lines of the battle. This sort of thing confuses me.
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  17. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Turning a phrase like that always works well. It's clever, yet at the same time easily recognisable.
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  18. Alvin Karpis

    Alvin Karpis New Member

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  19. TheIlliterate

    TheIlliterate Well-Known Member

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    Bumping for votes.
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  20. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    too much extra post in this thread, do NOT up your battle..
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