Joey Lawrence vs Deadly Weapon

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  1. Word of Ill Omen

    Word of Ill Omen New Member

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    10 lines due asap
    5 votes to win

    explain votes

    goodluck
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  2. Word of Ill Omen

    Word of Ill Omen New Member

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    Suck my AIDS ridden cock you faggot...

    Imma start by grabbin u at the neck & proceedin to bend
    i dont even need a gun to handle deadly weapon
    ur makin a step in the wrong direction, just hault
    dog how does it feel knowin all ur wins were defaults
    ur useless, ur nothing but a fucking burden
    how does it feel to lose every match uve been in
    fuckin nerd, i bet when votes come in ull bitch & such
    then ill hit u in the face so hard that ur fuckin cheek bones'll touch
    what, u thought you would win that easy, this'll trouble u
    Im breaking D in half and leavin with the W
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  3. Deadly Weapon

    Deadly Weapon Fuck off

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    Aight, Weps spittin fire to leave ya slain as u melt
    no a.k.a., ya still can't make a real name for yaself
    feel the pain that i've dealt, fist thru the puny neck
    no one feelin ya writtens, n they aint immune to text
    so so soon to ya death, stick a broom thru ya chest
    just 'swept ya breath away' so whos doom is next ?
    cuz obviously, u werent cut out for this rappin game
    got my hand stained red from this bitch slappin gave


    murked..
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  4. Word of Ill Omen

    Word of Ill Omen New Member

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  5. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    heres the breakdown:

    Joey's verse:

    Imma start by grabbin u at the neck & proceedin to bend
    i dont even need a gun to handle deadly weapon(aight opener)
    ur makin a step in the wrong direction, just hault
    dog how does it feel knowin all ur wins were defaults(whoa)
    ur useless, ur nothing but a fucking burden
    how does it feel to lose every match uve been in(aight)
    fuckin nerd, i bet when votes come in ull bitch & such
    then ill hit u in the face so hard that ur fuckin cheek bones'll touch(ouch)
    what, u thought you would win that easy, this'll trouble u
    Im breaking D in half and leavin with the W(nice fuggin ending)

    had some punches in there..I like how the verse was put together..the flo was coo..the punches were cool

    fav lines:

    what, u thought you would win that easy, this'll trouble u
    Im breaking D in half and leavin with the W

    ur makin a step in the wrong direction, just hault
    dog how does it feel knowin all ur wins were defaults

    7/10 blood drops


    DW's verse:

    Aight, Weps spittin fire to leave ya slain as u melt
    no a.k.a., ya still can't make a real name for yaself(whoa!)
    feel the pain that i've dealt, fist thru the puny neck
    no one feelin ya writtens, n they aint immune to text(nice)
    so so soon to ya death, stick a broom thru ya chest
    just 'swept ya breath away' so whos doom is next ?(nice)
    cuz obviously, u werent cut out for this rappin game
    got my hand stained red from this bitch slappin gave(decent endin

    I like your verse better because the flo was a bit more better with the content as far as punches DW..nice verse I was feeling some lines here...

    fav lines:

    Aight, Weps spittin fire to leave ya slain as u melt
    no a.k.a., ya still can't make a real name for yaself(whoa!)

    feel the pain that i've dealt, fist thru the puny neck
    no one feelin ya writtens, n they aint immune to text(nice)

    so so soon to ya death, stick a broom thru ya chest
    just 'swept ya breath away' so whos doom is next ?

    8.4/10 blood drops


    Vote: DW
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