~Jesus Got Played~

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Mind~$oul, Jul 5, 2004.

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  1. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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  2. Clarksvegas_Dan

    Clarksvegas_Dan Registered Voter

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    Nope, I'm still not feeling this piece. It's not my intention to insult, but these are the religious/philosophical feelings I was going through at like age 13. I got past this agnostic frustration around 16 or 17. I think. lol. Anyways, I still like the fact that the issue weighs heavily enough on your mind to write a poem about it. And it was pretty insightful. But it doesn't really hit home for me. Peace.
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  3. MURDERGHOST

    MURDERGHOST New Member

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    Damn...i love reading your thoughts when i come to this site...

    "you can't hold a sin as a secret"... deep... and very true!




    thanks for sharing your thoughts with us...
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  4. sagacious infant

    sagacious infant reflecting the sun

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    and take heed in it
    cuz faith is fantasy
    when it takes a story book by man for you to see...
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  5. Index Lewis

    Index Lewis Sadomasochist.

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    "mark me as a sinner because I choose
    no religon...
    I know somebody keeps
    me breathing....
    but i'm too stubborn to
    believe it..."

    nice piece man
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  6. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    jesus got played

    yes he did, and you pointed it out very well!!

    peace
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  7. ManMadeofAshes

    ManMadeofAshes *DREAMER

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    this is good. thoughtful... makes me want to write a little anti jesus poem of my own!! This is sort cause I got to go, but I will write you more later.
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  8. Evg.poet

    Evg.poet As the Heart Speaks...

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    This was good.....u expressed ya self well as useual and Thank God you spoke the truth.....
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  9. rhino_number_33

    rhino_number_33 RRRRROOOOOAAAAARRRR!

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    i know wat u r feeling, i sometimes question if god is real and all that, good piece
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  10. DaJackle

    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    i agree, but its simplicity created something deep that A LOT of people can relate to...i know a whole lot of people who feel this way...some of the images were just great...nice drop mind
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  11. Lil'Dragon

    Lil'Dragon [nOw iZ tHa TyMe tO AkT]

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    Well hello stranger. Nice key for real - feelin what u were preaching, cept for the massachusetts bit, but maybe koz im not down with american history or sumthing. And i didnt know u were agnostic - had no idea after all this time. But im feelin this, i feel like writing sumthing new and diff, but nowadays i hardly ever write, only when i need to vent some serious shit. I should be postin sumthing up later, but no dates set. Anyway hope to read more of ya shit! PS - Common is da bomb!

    <CheK>
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