Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Mind~$oul, Jul 5, 2004.
Nope, I'm still not feeling this piece. It's not my intention to insult, but these are the religious/philosophical feelings I was going through at like age 13. I got past this agnostic frustration around 16 or 17. I think. lol. Anyways, I still like the fact that the issue weighs heavily enough on your mind to write a poem about it. And it was pretty insightful. But it doesn't really hit home for me. Peace.
Damn...i love reading your thoughts when i come to this site...
"you can't hold a sin as a secret"... deep... and very true!
thanks for sharing your thoughts with us...
and take heed in it
cuz faith is fantasy
when it takes a story book by man for you to see...
"mark me as a sinner because I choose
I know somebody keeps
but i'm too stubborn to
nice piece man
jesus got played
yes he did, and you pointed it out very well!!
this is good. thoughtful... makes me want to write a little anti jesus poem of my own!! This is sort cause I got to go, but I will write you more later.
This was good.....u expressed ya self well as useual and Thank God you spoke the truth.....
i know wat u r feeling, i sometimes question if god is real and all that, good piece
i agree, but its simplicity created something deep that A LOT of people can relate to...i know a whole lot of people who feel this way...some of the images were just great...nice drop mind
Well hello stranger. Nice key for real - feelin what u were preaching, cept for the massachusetts bit, but maybe koz im not down with american history or sumthing. And i didnt know u were agnostic - had no idea after all this time. But im feelin this, i feel like writing sumthing new and diff, but nowadays i hardly ever write, only when i need to vent some serious shit. I should be postin sumthing up later, but no dates set. Anyway hope to read more of ya shit! PS - Common is da bomb!
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