~Jay Slimm vs. RAW CLOWN~

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Jay Slimm, Oct 9, 2003.

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  1. Jay Slimm

    Jay Slimm 6-1-6ko's

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    hmmmmm....he's gonna hand me my first loss....we'll see


    15 lines or less
    first to 5 votes wins
    I'll post up first


    peace................
    test
  2. Jay Slimm

    Jay Slimm 6-1-6ko's

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  3. Jay Slimm

    Jay Slimm 6-1-6ko's

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    Aight here we go......bout to eat this clown.....lol


    man people so 'Tired' of you shit - we need to 'get to bed quicker'
    cause you even faker - than your gangsta talk - and 50 cent picture
    you ain't sick bra - and never been a - soldier of worth
    Ima heavyweight on the scene- can you - shoulder the gerth
    it's fold or get hurt - battle me - losin will happin...
    RC was never ill - he went straight from a - noob to a hasbeen!
    your whole unit is laughing - best believe they not G's
    Please!....Quit rappin - your wack kid - just Go!...Leave!
    jesus - test Jay - it's a mess meng - when I'm - firing Ruthless...
    ima 'ERASE' this clown - leave em more 'RUBBED OUT THAN RETIRED MASSEUSES'!!
    0oohh this gettin bad - are u embarassed or fallen
    you dared to be callin - just get the picture I'm better - and Stare at the drawing!...
    It ain't fair that i'm 'BALLIN'... - and yo ass bustin wack - you could be too...but you NEED NUTS FOR THAT!!!!pussy....lol


    your turn.....
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  4. Sizzle

    Sizzle Molesting Your Skills

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  5. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    Jay's chances are slimm..should of knew u neva had a shot//
    my verse shine while ur dim, u still got sun'd and aint hot//
    fuck this gay herb from wisconsin, crush an crack ya skulla//
    this ni99a chicken like swanson, an Im a Hungry Boa//
    I knew u had cheesy lines…like I said this herb’s from Wisconsin//
    ima bad guy dat wins like Bronson, losin is ur only option//
    Im the dude wit the upper hand, my words is sharp urz are wack planned//
    Im cutting u down to the ground till u really broken “timber-on-land”//
    Keep writing like a Farve, old and retirement closing//
    And Ima Strike all ya bones down like I wuz bowling//
    I got balls ni99a, u just stick text cuz u cant audio wit dat write//
    I got my man hood flo, and you got ur stink twat hype//


    Im done…​







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  6. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    uppin for votes..
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  7. Nailze

    Nailze New Member

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    yo this was a nice battle this is how i see it

    Jay slimm the verse was tight just hard to follow and not to the point i thought you could have came more HARDER WIT THE PUNCHES

    this is my fav line tho

    "RC was never ill - he went straight from a - noob to a hasbeen!
    your whole unit is laughing - best believe they not G's
    Please!....Quit rappin - your wack kid - just Go!...Leave!"

    Rc your flow was alittle better to me or at least easier to follow you came wit some aight punches but nothing great.

    this was my fav line
    Jay's chances are slimm..should of knew u neva had a shot//
    my verse shine while ur dim, u still got sun'd and aint hot//


    all in all
    Jay slimm had better
    multis
    punches
    and metahs

    Rc had better
    flow

    Vote Slimm
    good battle
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  8. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    Im vote Slimm

    I read it twice,

    Raw Clwn punches wasnt up to par like slimm was, even though Raw Clwn was more consistent wit the flow, it was just nothing hard hitting, Slimm style fit more audio,

    it's fold or get hurt - battle me - losin will happin...
    RC was never ill - he went straight from a - noob to a hasbeen!


    0oohh this gettin bad - are u embarassed or fallen
    you dared to be callin - just get the picture I'm better - and Stare at the drawing!...

    I got balls ni99a, u just stick text cuz u cant audio wit dat write//
    I got my man hood flo, and you got ur stink twat hype//
    aight at most

    ALL ILL SHIT

    ........Sherlock........
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  9. Sizzle

    Sizzle Molesting Your Skills

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    flow was equal
    wordplay equal
    but jay out did him in punches

    vote=jay
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  10. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    thats bullshit..3-0 KO..I had personals..
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  11. Jay Slimm

    Jay Slimm 6-1-6ko's

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    Damn....lol...thanks for voting......ko

    peace
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  12. Rude-Shotty

    Rude-Shotty Yes Im Evil

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    that should of been ur first loss..
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  13. Jay Slimm

    Jay Slimm 6-1-6ko's

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    nman why don't you give it to me.....abgain KO...ain't nobody beatin me....
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  14. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    "thats bullshit..3-0 KO..I had personals.."-raw clown

    yeah, that's what all nikkas say after they wake up in the ring on the canvas and the arena is empty...lmao
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  15. VerbalWeaponz

    VerbalWeaponz Unholy-Syndicate

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    lol.....no beef man he jus outdid ur personals wit his punches mayn.....dats all

    Verbal
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