Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by Jay Bee, Dec 15, 2011.
same rules as last time.
check in and ill post mine first.
Im not going to be able to do it tonight tho. Tom no prob.
Ur gonna have to specify to your handlers wether u plan on actually having a punchline battle or u just intend to have a 'cool flow' for 12bars
We can do whatever
5:09 AM now ill drop when i get off work
ill have to drop a few hours later if youre 3 hrs ahead ill still b at work
Look at payback, trying to act tough like your uncaring are we?
When my first rep points was you saying “im sincerely sorry”
PUSSY! U fuckin weak but want another round wit jay
How your tracks been up 6 years with just a thousand plays?
Ya bitch ass need to quit rap if your track that lame
U couldn’t get a fuckin deal at a blackjack game
Check the scale u can’t make weight for battlin jay
Ya flow wavy, so maybe your win just paddled away
My flow is art i show it off like a gargoyle will
Matter fact ya verse was the real “BP oil spill”
You say “your bodies a temple” as God says, but are you fa real?
But the truth is in a thread that you admit abusing pills
you a fiend on the low, im fuckin mean with the flow
my gun make ya face numb like a scene out of Blow
everytime we prove you wrong you ignore the boss
so DemiGod just close this thread cuz you know he lost
I already won, I should go ahead and take the bow
that means you lose, so ya, not even Jesus can save you now.
but really.. that was 14420605x better than your last one, give ya that.
aww well, we can all tell, raps still something you beginer at.
I should shoot the guy, who told you to try, to come out.
In fact (name 2 people, ill wait.......)
and your family members dont count.
i get it, you tryin to be polemic, but talks cheap.
and against me, in anything, you just gone lay down, like a lost sheep.
how u the punchline king of virginia, u prolly the only square there.
he said hed battle me so i repented, for murdering a care bare.
com'mon jay bee, you need a J-o-b, if these losses not registreing.
seriously hows a drama queen become a king?
but i really did this just to brag, not really to hurt the fag,
no one gotta vote
if you wanna know who won again, just go ahead and check the tags.
that was quite obvious a win by jay b
the multis and flow were far better (not that PB had a bad verse, just...eh, it's wasn't really good)
Jay's punch lines were much more direct with a good set up/delivery style
much more personal as well
PB, you had him on vocabulary, but your punches were more like, unrelated couplets...it coulda been good, but the connections weren't there and the flow was very off at a few points
Not if u mind the commas
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