Jai-Z vs KRayz

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  1. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    10 linez
    due asap

    I can tell youa bitch! Dont gva fuck if you Krayz
    your punchlinez like your sneaker collection, youre nvr rockng Jaiz
    Dont gva fuck what you tote, glock talk is cheap
    your battle verse? Strepped Throat; silenced whn you speak
    Ima K.O. artist, these hitz crazy impactful
    my left handz nvr shy, but the right handz bash-full
    You can see Ima handful, and Im deadly wth wrdz
    smash your face n? You'll b Facelesss like that other RM herb
    Weak nerd get yo weight up, cz you fold under pressure
    win by a hair? How? Your practically Uncle Fester
    test
  2. KRayz...

    KRayz... New Member

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    you just woke and poked the bear now imma have to offend ya/
    is that a lump in your throat bitch your looking trans-gender

    so now your an offical renegade i can see/
    but once again the white boy beat jai-z

    make movie refrences not good enough to phase me/
    coz i make a fucking ghost outta you like you were patrick swayze

    you called me out i bet that shits regretable/
    tearing out your memories to make this battle forgettable

    ten rhymes in a line that shit i speed thru/
    must of had a hunger for defeat bitch so i had to feed you
    test
  3. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    Jai Z- solid verse overall for being short and using a lot of abbreviations for words, which got annoying after a few, but I got the vibe throughout and each line made a nice impact with your opener and right hand being the strongest of your lines

    Krayz- I thought your opener had potential for a real nice punch and that if you were able to hit JAI with some solid punches it would be with that kind of approach, while there was plenty of potential in your lines there was not an overall feel of "damn those were hard punchlines" your renegade line was the nicest in the battle but the other stuff was generally played and not creative enough to me, good short little battle, I would love to see a SECOND ROUND

    vote= JAI Z

    please return the favor against RAZ Vs Precise
    test
  4. G Force

    G Force Member

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    Jai-Z - i think you had some decent references in the lines. In some lines the references were better than others. The line that stood out for me was:
    'my left handz nvr shy, but the right handz bash-full'
    I think you showed some creativity with that one. It is the creativity of the punch which makes a greater impact.

    KRayz - I think the rhyming was OK but you didn't show quite as much consistancy as Jai-Z. This was my favourite line of yours:
    'make movie refrences not good enough to phase me/
    coz i make a fucking ghost outta you like you were patrick swayze'

    SUMMARY - I think its difficult too see who is really the better battler over such a short battle. I think if each writter does 2 verses, with each writter showing flips then you truly get to see who is the best. However, from the lines dropped here i would say Jai-Z takes it just from the better creativity.

    VOTE - Jai-Z
    test
  5. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    Dont gva fuck what you tote, glock talk is cheap
    your battle verse? Strepped Throat; silenced whn you speak
    Ima K.O. artist, these hitz crazy impactful
    my left handz nvr shy, but the right handz bash-full

    This was a nice little pucnh here...

    you just woke and poked the bear now imma have to offend ya/
    is that a lump in your throat bitch your looking trans-gender

    ten rhymes in a line that shit i speed thru/
    must of had a hunger for defeat bitch so i had to feed you

    I loved these bars...

    VOTE JAI-Z... Here's why... KRAYZ U have a nice little rhyme scheme BUT U have lines that HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO PUNCHES! Which wouldnt be so bad if U didn't only spit 8-10 verses. That means u have silence in like half of your rhymes... THAT SUX! If U insist on SHORT BATTLES U HAVE 2 SMACK THEM THROUGHOUT THE BATTLE! That is just some advice...

    This I COMMAND!!!
    test
  6. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    I can tell youa bitch! Dont gva fuck if you Krayz
    your punchlinez like your sneaker collection, youre nvr rockng Jaiz
    --meh
    Dont gva fuck what you tote, glock talk is cheap
    your battle verse? Strepped Throat; silenced whn you speak
    --fell off w/ this verse...could've went 'Strepped Throat; never hear a cough n speak (coffin speak) woulda' flowed a lil better maybe with 'talk is cheap' and had some punch...
    Ima K.O. artist, these hitz crazy impactful
    my left handz nvr shy, but the right handz bash-full
    --i liked this
    You can see Ima handful, and Im deadly wth wrdz
    smash your face n? You'll b Facelesss like that other RM herb
    --ehh idk
    Weak nerd get yo weight up, cz you fold under pressure
    win by a hair? How? Your practically Uncle Fester
    --ok

    versus

    you just woke and poked the bear now imma have to offend ya/
    is that a lump in your throat bitch your looking trans-gender
    --meh
    so now your an offical renegade i can see/
    but once again the white boy beat jai-z
    --ok w/ the em ref
    make movie refrences not good enough to phase me/
    coz i make a fucking ghost outta you like you were patrick swayze
    --played out
    you called me out i bet that shits regretable/
    tearing out your memories to make this battle forgettable
    --meh
    ten rhymes in a line that shit i speed thru/
    must of had a hunger for defeat bitch so i had to feed you
    --meh

    this battle was weak. I vote a tie for being equally wack.

    jk

    jai-z..by an uncle fester
    test
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