J Dot C 3-0 vs. Zuch 3-0

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  1. Con God

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  2. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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    maxing out
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  3. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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  4. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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    my shits done, but im not postin up til u do since im not gettin fucked again by a noshow
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  5. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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    fuck it.. get out of my league


    now i hope this aint boastin you kid
    but you remind me of orbit... when storm aint ghostin his shit
    3-0? thats why ive had it with bitches
    ill hit the four-zero quick enough to rival your daddys addiction
    its pointless, so to stop this guy
    my shit'll hit career lowes, when i talk about his job in life
    desperate faggot, i flip the script on you fool
    ya not only up at the crack of dawn, you stick ya dick in it too
    as for ya lines? you should be quittin
    nigga you droppin more periods than puberty clinics
    that line ends ya run, your reign was wellstrung
    but your recent shit proves not alot has changed since el-dub
    battlin me? you'll stall and quit
    you shoulda took advice from my last 2 opponents and called in sick
    you know im strait hustlin you kid
    plus your hand and jawbone share joint custody of my dick

    ill never lose..
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  6. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    U fuckin nerd...

    Zuch's got tha lamest writtens, so I'll waste this dame tha quickest...
    His face'll smack a wall, street, or any other place that gains my interest...
    I'm tha best u'll see, but u'll get tha glock if u mention me...
    & then we'll see Zu lose, like an African documentary...
    My aim's never off, I'll put a bullseye on ur pocket protector...
    & then hit tha Target, like WalMart protestors..
    Zuch can't defend himself, murder's all she wrote kid...
    So when I get outta hand, he'll just resort to deepthroatin...
    Plus I kill queers, & now we all know this cat blows fellas...
    I'll put a hole in ur chest big enough to make ur asshole jealous...
    Fuck ur flows kid, u suck & everyone knows this...
    & wins? I'll see 4, like plastic explosives...
    So u should fear this, cuz my punches hit hard & spear kids...
    & will put a ring around ur eye so big, ur ears'll hear it...
    This man shouldn't boast, & now I demand he use soap...
    Cuz I'll move u so far down in tha ranks, u'll give tha janitors hope...
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  7. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    boo@ flippin crack of dawn
    i just did that last week :(
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  8. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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    if u have time to critiscize u have time to vote

    battles been up for 2 fuckin days
    wtf
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  9. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    now i hope this aint boastin you kid
    but you remind me of orbit... when storm aint ghostin his shit

    nice lil Opener...feelin it

    3-0? thats why ive had it with bitches
    ill hit the four-zero quick enough to rival your daddys addiction


    Maybe i'm a retard but this is flying over my head

    its pointless, so to stop this guy
    my shit'll hit career lowes, when i talk about his job in life

    decent...pretty Nice lil diss

    desperate faggot, i flip the script on you fool
    ya not only up at the crack of dawn, you stick ya dick in it too

    pretty creative...i like


    as for ya lines? you should be quittin
    nigga you droppin more periods than puberty clinics

    No...played concept



    that line ends ya run, your reign was wellstrung
    but your recent shit proves not alot has changed since el-dub

    nice personal...feelin it

    battlin me? you'll stall and quit
    you shoulda took advice from my last 2 opponents and called in sick

    i like...nice


    you know im strait hustlin you kid
    plus your hand and jawbone share joint custody of my dick

    Nice ender...

    Overall i was feelin ya verse No OHHH SHIT lines but no I cant believe he said that wack shit..Lines either....All in all Very solid verse




    Zuch's got tha lamest writtens, so I'll waste this dame tha quickest...
    His face'll smack a wall, street, or any other place that gains my interest...

    haha Grimey as line...I'm lovin it


    I'm tha best u'll see, but u'll get tha glock if u mention me...
    & then we'll see Zu lose, like an African documentary...

    Lmao Nice ass name flip....

    My aim's never off, I'll put a bullseye on ur pocket protector...
    & then hit tha Target, like WalMart protestors..

    Another grimey line...i like


    Zuch can't defend himself, murder's all she wrote kid...
    So when I get outta hand, he'll just resort to deepthroatin...

    Decent...gettin tired of dick sucking lines though

    Plus I kill queers, & now we all know this cat blows fellas...
    I'll put a hole in ur chest big enough to make ur asshole jealous...

    LMAO nice,nice...set up was ehh But the Punch was ILL

    Fuck ur flows kid, u suck & everyone knows this...
    & wins? I'll see 4, like plastic explosives...

    Nice and creative

    So u should fear this, cuz my punches hit hard & spear kids...
    & will put a ring around ur eye so big, ur ears'll hear it...

    DAMN i was lovin this

    This man shouldn't boast, & now I demand he use soap...
    Cuz I'll move u so far down in tha ranks, u'll give tha janitors hope...

    Decent ender

    All in all NICE verse...some very creative disses the name flip was HELL.....very good verse


    J dot c got this


    this was a very good battle i was feeling both of you kats yall both top notch....J just came a lil harder and had THE OHHH SHIT lines Zu was missin...

    great job guys

    VOTE-J
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  10. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    ^^ayo...zuch's 4-0 line is referrin to 4-0 record as well as a 40 (oz) as in OE or steel reserve...

    thanks for tha vote tho...1Ne
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  11. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    ^^^got cha.lol that just flew right over me..lol

    but good battles guys
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  12. stickman

    stickman music entrepreneur

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    Siryn line
    even after getting banned at RTM, you're still biting
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  13. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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    lmao @ callin that biting


    yeah noone off of this site knows you


    get a life
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  14. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    it's not a bite...at most u can call it played...I did tha same line (almost) back on rtm...I said "crack of tha mornin" tho cuz dawn is a female's name so stickin ur dick in a female's crack really ain't gay...

    now please stop accusin zuch of bitin or flippin or wuteva...shit's old period...

    now all of u who got time to read tha verses got time to drop a vote...so let's see em...
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  15. .Realism.

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    zuch had a lot of personals...nice shit from him i was feelin the 40 line, the career lowes, and the dawn line...foreal ive never seen it...but im from 411 so its possible...

    jc came with witty ass punches...i was feelin his opener and closer...and the asshole jealous shit...lol

    but in all, i gotta vote JC cuz he was way more witty, good battle zuch...i see you beatin him next time...
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  16. Funasty

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    Zuchie had better rhythm with his punches, but JC came with some better ones...

    These were the only aite lines from Zuchie verse..


    ^I started to feel it towards the end with these barz, you came vicious with these...

    JC had these bars..
    The word play was just better and he came with some great punches, I felt he fell of towards the end thou.. the janitor line closing was just bad..

    All around..

    Vote: J Dot
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  17. Sirius Lee

    Sirius Lee u unno me!

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    hmm..


    Zuch


    now i hope this aint boastin you kid
    but you remind me of orbit... when storm aint ghostin his shit
    ^im not big on openers nemore but this was good

    3-0? thats why ive had it with bitches
    ill hit the four-zero quick enough to rival your daddys addiction
    ^good

    its pointless, so to stop this guy
    my shit'll hit career lowes, when i talk about his job in life
    ^creative

    desperate faggot, i flip the script on you fool
    ya not only up at the crack of dawn, you stick ya dick in it too
    ^even if it has been used, its not that good

    as for ya lines? you should be quittin
    nigga you droppin more periods than puberty clinics
    ^ wasnt really feelin it

    that line ends ya run, your reign was wellstrung
    but your recent shit proves not alot has changed since el-dub
    ^above average

    battlin me? you'll stall and quit
    you shoulda took advice from my last 2 opponents and called in sick
    ^mmk

    you know im strait hustlin you kid
    plus your hand and jawbone share joint custody of my dick
    ^ for some reason this made me grin


    i like the verse overall, u trailed off but it was above average as whole


    j.

    Zuch's got tha lamest writtens, so I'll waste this dame tha quickest...
    His face'll smack a wall, street, or any other place that gains my interest...
    ^kind of long for a regular line, i was waitin for the punch

    I'm tha best u'll see, but u'll get tha glock if u mention me...
    & then we'll see Zu lose, like an African documentary...
    ^not feelin the name flip since no one calls him zu

    My aim's never off, I'll put a bullseye on ur pocket protector...
    & then hit tha Target, like WalMart protestors..
    ^nope

    Zuch can't defend himself, murder's all she wrote kid...
    So when I get outta hand, he'll just resort to deepthroatin...
    ^very nice. set up could've been better

    Plus I kill queers, & now we all know this cat blows fellas...
    I'll put a hole in ur chest big enough to make ur asshole jealous...
    ^ i guess i wasnt feelin this because i've heard it be4

    Fuck ur flows kid, u suck & everyone knows this...
    & wins? I'll see 4, like plastic explosives...
    ^ok

    So u should fear this, cuz my punches hit hard & spear kids...
    & will put a ring around ur eye so big, ur ears'll hear it...
    ^ nice as well, could've been worded alot better

    This man shouldn't boast, & now I demand he use soap...
    Cuz I'll move u so far down in tha ranks, u'll give tha janitors hope
    ^average



    j. was good too, he needs work on wording tho, him and zuch both had filler but his were stretched.. didnt flow that good either, zuch's did so....



    v/ zuch
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  18. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    yo, th is battle was fucking crack yo



    Zuch's got tha lamest writtens, so I'll waste this dame tha quickest...
    His face'll smack a wall, street, or any other place that gains my interest...
    I'm tha best u'll see, but u'll get tha glock if u mention me...
    & then we'll see Zu lose, like an African documentary...

    those lines by J Dot were fucking awesome, that first line is sick and that second is funny, haha

    now i hope this aint boastin you kid
    but you remind me of orbit... when storm aint ghostin his shit
    3-0? thats why ive had it with bitches
    ill hit the four-zero quick enough to rival your daddys addiction
    its pointless, so to stop this guy
    my shit'll hit career lowes, when i talk about his job in life

    yo, the first two were funny, and that last line is SICK.....





    vote tie

    yall both had another line that i didnt quote that were dope too, this battle had like 4 -6 good punches that are better then what the past pp lines were



    TIE MY NIGGA'S
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  19. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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    yeah was a good battle
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