Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by J-Alike, Feb 6, 2010.
10 line battle...post at anytime 2day
1st to 3 votes wINZ
Excuse me but I don't like battling children
I'm an earthquake, you're a rattling building
watch how I shatter your feelings, break your morale
you like to suck dick but this ain't the corral.
I'm a true life boss you're just cashing checks
I've been around the world, you haven't left the nest
I'm telling you dawg you better reconsider
battling me, typing the keys, yeah u hard on twitter
but when u see me you'll flee like a critter
I'll drop you lower than the pants on a wigger.
bitch ass ******
Cliq Claq gone get smackd, i advise you run for your clique jack
I'm Wesly Snipes in New Jack, you Chris Rock with sum food stamps
I was in the cypher forum just spittin off the dome
From the safety of your home you came at me straight hatin
If you think u the realist MC and u hot than I MUST BE SATAN
I got lines that change times, yous a clone you mock mimes
So play your part and act it out like a Brokeback Mountain cowboy
Suckin dick in a tent, its probably a new WEii game you'd invent
Fuckin prick i guess you'd thought this battle would be easy
Wipe yoself off cuz u the only one here whos bleedin
I'm poetic, flowetic, magnetic
aesthetic, respect it, you restless
there's no way u can compete against my record
there's no way u can impede or break my message
so take it as a lesson, the mic is not my profession
I come on this website to play and recollect, then...
...I grab the keyboard and type some rhymes
genuine like a fine wine i go back in time to refine my mind
you ought to polish your flow, it's a bout as rusty as my granpa's trombone.
no, i don't have a bone to pick,
i pick a bone off a drumstick
and stab you in the throat with it.
was a dope line.
Although around about the whole, 'inventing dick sucking games on wii' you sorta fell off, gay jokes are really cliche and over-played unless it's originally flipped and neither of you did it well enough
Cliq Claq, you're just not good.
Then bring it, bitch. Let's see what you're made of! Let me test your mettle. Are you a mouse or a (wo)man?
Lol, be easy son.
all i'm doing is tryna give you some feedback, you need to elevate alot.
aint nothing wrong with just starting out.
Starting out? Man I've been rapping for 20 years!
don't even try to play that man, i've seen your picture.
you aint even 20 years old.
First, graduate Jr. High, then come battle me when you're ready, punk ass bitch.
uhhhh...yea..i gtaduated already asshole...and battle u?...i thought thas what i did...ur mothers a f.uckface
Cliq...overall better structure,consistent in his approach...didn't like the 2nd attempt at tryna steal a win so I voted off the the first set..J seemed forced and unpolished...
Gotta go with CC.
As stated earlier CC's structure was much better. It flowed better. He didn't really get personal with it.
J-alike had a few good lines, but some really corny/gay stuff. It seemed forced. didn't flow as well.
No hate in any direction though.
J-Alike smashed on this one....v= J-Alike
dayumn...close one 2-2...next point winz
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