IV vs. Pent uP --- Loser Leaves the RSTL 4 1 YEAR

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  1. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    RSTL RULES WITH tHIS WEEKS TOPICS

    DUE THANKSGIVING
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  2. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    If you had twenty four hours to live just think
    Where would you go?
    What would you do?
    Who would you screw?
    And who would you wanna notify?
    Or would yo' ass deny that yo' ass about to die?
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  3. HellRzah

    HellRzah PurE EviL

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    this gon' be hot if y'all show
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  4. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    BOOM!!!

    A Woman's Struggle


    Part 1

    Cherish The Love


    It seems in dreams serene love scenes capture the moment
    and batter that rodent called desire and shatter opponents
    of love's conquest, i need to choose, to bleed and bruise
    in these uneasy shoes i trample in to seek refuge
    from freaks who choose who i should love, i read the news
    and i refuse to fall into man's noose, their mental abuse
    of my gender, cuz i've been in love since i was five
    the black kid that worked to stay alive, without him im deprived
    he survived my parents torture in order stay with me
    he'd slave fifty hours and in two with me, gave plenty
    of good vibrations, he had patience through lifes complications
    with an ejaculation of imagination we over came his frustrations
    BUT... his black skin paved his cave into a shallow grave
    this brave slave craved freedom and wouldn't behave
    he gave me love, and my parents killed him for it
    they called him ••••••, but to hate? im still ignorant

    Part 2

    Blackest Thoughts


    I left home, alone a broken spoke open to hope
    but to cope with these token blokes was a fuckin' joke
    i couldnt vote, own property, or get paid decent wages
    my soul rages against the machine, i had to engage it
    however lifes stages grew rough and what i do sucks
    a prostitute chokin' heads until they finally threw up
    in my placenta they entered leaving my clit splintered
    i was a winner helping men bust breakfast, lunch, and dinner
    and every winter i had a new child from making the bedrock
    earning an A on my sleeve for having them outta wedlock
    Men had my life in a headlock but i KNEW the solution
    with execution i prepared the womans FIRST revolution

    Part 3

    Revolution


    I got myself together to sever the mans grip on society
    anxiety coursed my flesh to end this propriety
    this patriarchy that these manarchist hid in their armpits
    if i could only wipe them away like they did to starving artist
    our grip on this issue rested on me, cuz i planned to fight
    and tonight i will make a difference, abandon fright
    in my breast, they will lay me to rest but nevertheless
    the stress will bless all women in distress in this mess
    ill be a pest as i got dressed in THEIR clothes, this HO
    and i will flow into THEIR workplace and WORK their HOES
    better than them, in the coldest weather for them
    while they bitched and complained, i'd never give in
    until the hem from my bra popped lose showin a tit
    they stared in amusement then they said, "we're ownin this bitch
    this WITCH, imposed a sin against jesus, your no genius
    should we all dress up as we fuck you?" they all grabbed their penis
    and inserted me with diseases, bitches get stitches
    "All salem witches in ditches" they screamed with bad intentions
    they viciously burned me at the stake drowning all of my screams
    and then dressed up in celebration, and called it halloween

    O death, where is thy sting? O grave, where is thy victory?
    Bible, 1 Corinthians xv. 55.
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  5. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    I can't believe yall actually doin this.... lol
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  6. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    O death, where is thy sting? O grave, where is thy victory?
    Bible, 1 Corinthians xv. 55.



    Senses are hazed, convoying through messes and craze,
    here trenches are graves for the defensless with haste
    as scope lenses are aimed at heads, but hit legs and their waist.
    I clench my grenade for any unfinished treachorous gaze
    that deserves its limbs to be anulled by my bursting tin.
    I smirk or grin pending on which way their turban spins.
    the earth is trimmed while dilated eyes firmly squint
    as blood's merged with wind throughout my humvy circlin
    making gimps of sandlords as i drop shells for the shit I stand for
    my grip on land war slips when a mine flips my transport
    a ruthless change, being upside down feeling doom and pain
    seeing pebbles on my breathing level get consumed by flames,
    I became weary and mulled if I'd end up on a dreary mantel.
    Hearing shrapnel cutting my skin and piercing my skull,
    I was singed like some toast, lasting minutes at most
    with pins in my lobes the size of liqourice ropes
    You're trapped somewhere with no way out.

    She starts to descend as the scalpel carves in her skin,
    peels back part of it, then feels the brain throbbing within
    filtering out anyone while he's chizzeling her cranium
    because everybody saw her dwindeling to basic crums
    sweating from the strain of not rendering her slain
    while he tries helping her migrane taking metal out her brain
    the skull was then placed in her ribs for nutritients
    the chance of living given to this kid was 2 percent
    and they left her in a coma induced by medicine
    Truelly heaven sent, how it didnt confuse her head or sense


    Dancers eating towels...
    and some breathing clouds
    that burst into flashes of a hand thats reaching out
    Metallic liquid, transforms into a galaxy quick
    magically it forms slits in the shapes of japanese print
    resembelling a partial brain attacked by shockwaves
    then dragged across bays to memories stacked with lost lanes
    walking down which, I can only stare at my shoes
    each one being a landmine thats blaring its tunes
    The scariest view is that the clouds are fairly amused
    as they laugh to death and explode...carrying blues
    that black out....
    I Back out
    to my Dad House..
    But It gets me Nowhere fast....
    Wishing one of the clouds would drop a map now...
    smack down
    Release the tension
    Infront of me lights manifest from a fuzzy scene...
    a mundane dream? The shock forces an untamed scream
    stiches got tightened as hands clasp my head..which is lopsided
    the doctor rushes out the physicians box silent
    I threw down a weak punch but wanted to shout at least once
    as they told me I was out for three months
    but the next four I struggled with my mechanical functions
    along with somatical numbness and my savage concussion
    Holding my weight became a burden like a gorgeous inmate
    along with anatomical gushin, life seemed horribly raped
    the half skull attached to my rib is irritating, in fact
    i wanna scratch it a bit but my doc wants it unscathed and intact
    cuz he'll be placing it back...and I can't wait to meet this savior
    with owing my life, and an attraction to his discreet behavior
    it made me contemplate what to say on the day he'd operate
    So i stayed silent when we met and gave the proper space
    Find your happiest memory
    But when I awoke I needed neither a friend or a joke
    He at my side, beaming with pride, rendering hope
    to the dent on my dome, and to me as a human
    Freedom renewed and..
    who knows I might be seeing him too then​
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  7. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    vote pain. outstanding verse man. i hate saying that, because iv is a vital part of the league, and it should have been like a 1 month ban or something.....a year is a bithc, lol


    pains verse was just alot better. the rhyme scheme was clean, i think iv's was as well. but to be honest, i wasnt feeling his verses at all..i mean, the three parts were ambitious, but the execution was off....pain's verse was classically put together...no elements were missing. content, rhyme scheme, and basically proved a better wordsmith
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  8. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    PENT UP, not pain, but thanks
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  9. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    my bad, i got your pm today about the mix up.....yea, Pent up is who i meant, i tried to glance at the verse first, without seeing who, then went up to see which was which, so i saw P and assumed pain...


    good match
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  10. SacriFICE

    SacriFICE TRUspeak

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    I don't think I should vote on this... the stakes are too high and Pent is crew... so I'm just to give a breakdown when the votes are coming to a close...

    prelim. thoughts are, this is a good battle... 2 dope verses.
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  11. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    why this shit aint gettin no votes and its a banishment match?

    basically iv is cool peeps and shit, but he got wrecked this time around. the verse was too simplistic, mechanics werent polished at all and the rhyme scheme was cool but off at points. the best part of the piece was the ending no pun intended, it was just the highlight of your verse when you ended it with how halloween became.

    pent came to the battle like it was a real banishment battle, i aint seen pent write like this ever. the piece was more polished, better written, mechanically inclined, and just overall a better story. i was like man wtf is this nigguh talking about til i read an article that showed this same type of shit where they place pieces of skull in the ribs. the ending was kind of wack, thats the only thing iv had better was the ending.

    vote - pent
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  12. Mac Flow

    Mac Flow Die

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    you guys want me to vote on this? lemme know
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  13. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    I'm not voting because my opinion would clearly be assumed biased.... 2 votes though.. oh well.


    After you lose IV, does that mean you can't or won't be Mod anymore? That would be tragic, we still need your help
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  14. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    understood dic, but what's wrong with all the other emo thugs who talk all this shit, but when it comes down to a banishment match, they scared to vote. Pussies.
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  15. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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  16. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    lol... it's easy to act hard online when nothing's at stake. but anyway, Pent wins. IV will be hiding under an unknown alias for a year.
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