It's Like This

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by Exxxxis, Mar 28, 2013.

  1. Exxxxis

    Exxxxis .......................

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1350521-opposite-problem.html
    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1344051-doctor-doom-amphetamines.html


    Ayo,

    As you search for rep...I've earned respect,
    minus this serpent member in some worthless neck...
    not into suckin' the board off...
    like you cock munchin' faggots is...
    I'm on some box cutter Pazzie shit...
    Tech with the Kaliko,
    wrecked watchin' wasted hoes trip from the Spazzin' clip...
    every bitch is my enemy so there's no dick for them nasty lips...
    and a friendship with benefits will only lead to a path that's split...
    like the legs on an average trick...
    'fore she knew the meanin' of slut,
    now I bet she's wishin' she'd seen the sense into keepin' 'em shut...
    your only viewed as a has been when guests are peepin' your stuff...
    and vets be feedin' what's up just to prove they are past being...
    a self centered slash egocentric demeanin' ass fuck...
    you've got me eatin' vast chumps and numerous half breeds...
    if this is for nutritional value Ima consume it at flash speed...
    I am a super hero, you are a crack fiend...
    I be like numero uno...
    while your movements maneuver,
    your stupid ass to the back seat as you cruise towards loser status...
    the useless are newbies craftin'...
    a noose to hang around bastards stoopin'...
    to the level they've truly mastered...
    bein' classed as the wackest students...
    I am like acid usage, to the youth Ima massive nuisance...
    spittin' truth is my habit...backed by actual facts,
    and if ever I'm asked to prove it the proof's in the package...
    I've a knack for producin' what's havoc...
    mostly known as a musical savage,
    and by postin' up vicious reads...
    y'all will go down in history as my casualty stats.
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  2. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    nice multies man. props on this joint right here.
    I liked how this whole thing flowed.
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  3. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    lmao oh man this is wack as shit. this is lyrical garbage. thats why no good just said good multis whoa, you know how to rhyme words? an realisticly the multis werent woven that well. ha, very simple three sylabol non inner changing rhyme schemes. yeah, basic elementary garbage

    good job
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  4. Exxxxis

    Exxxxis .......................

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    I'd respond like this also after a real lyricist commented on your shit, and said it was wack...the fuck out my thread you Dr. Seuss rhymin' faggot.
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  5. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    Not a bad drop, but for some reason I'd like to hear this one over a beat..
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  6. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    Yea, you probably just found his kriptonite. look at those bars, obvious textcee you can tell by his structurin it wouldnt even fit over a beat. lol @ a real lyricist. na bro, id respond like this when i saw some half ass bullshit wrap from anybody under the sun. your concepts are eh at best, you think you have a niche rhymin but truthfully those schemes arent that great, so what are we lookin at? a pissed off textcee whos been strugglin to get some kind of respect, but in failin has created some bullshit alias to try to show the "skills" in a new light. a fresh take on a old wack ass nigga showin little to no improvment over years. i guess keep hackin away at music if you refuse to accept the reality of the situation that youre not gonna get even into the small clubs around your city, ur doomed to internet forum boards and open mic nights at bars that dont boo you out of the joint. good luck wit that homie. stay out of my thread cause i spit for real. i do this, i got crazy swag, crazy flow, alot more mc then any textcee can handle, that shits for sure.
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  7. SirFreshcoast

    SirFreshcoast New Member

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    True Life?

    True Life? I respect your craft. It sounds like you got a got a battle rap influence. Real gritty at times and intellectual at times. It was a lil simple but some of the most simple shit could have em gassin so dont let that stop you. just perfect your craft.
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