it is what it is

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by mr.redeyez, Jun 29, 2012.

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  1. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9keg9WsYnqo&feature=related

    I'm on tha edge
    wit' blood on ma' hands
    minus well leap,or add to tha beef
    take his momma while she sleep
    look bruh i'm in to deep
    so fuck bein' discreet
    last night i hit his street
    in a purple s.u.v,
    man dem boyz weak, s.w.v
    i say, u dont want trouble wit me.
    They say, ''fuck u bitch nigga''
    i paused, and said what, he say fuck u bitch nigga
    i peeled off, came back around and let loose
    6 shots, didnt wait to see tha out come
    i'm out chea.
    test
  2. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    what up red whats good ma nigga hahaa i see u still spittin heat on em
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  3. Trizzy Tre

    Trizzy Tre Cypher King

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    I thought this was decent, but scheme just seemed very simple. I could see where you were goin wit the flow, but IMO just needed a little more.

    Overall good read tho
    test
  4. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Already homie ... nice drop
    test
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