Is He The One?

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  1. Swiss Miss

    Swiss Miss New Member

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    Is he the one?
    He makes me smile and he makes me proud.
    He's the only one I can see in a crowd.
    For him I proclaim my love aloud.
    I love him and he loves me.
    If I am an ~~~~~ he is my tree.
    He is from the ground that has made what I've grown to be.
    He is everything I ever wanted and everything I don't deserve.
    For him my innocence has been preserved.
    I've never had to use my ears to hear what I've heard;
    He is the only man who can speak to me without saying a word
    He speaks to my heart and my heart listens.
    Our hearts combine as one, with no divisions.
    His very essence is refreshing,
    Finally I've discovered what's been missing.
    Praise God for the stars, the moon and the sun,
    I believe he is the ONE...


    Lauren Nicole Shade
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  2. AlmostFamous

    AlmostFamous U got a problem?

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    nice piece here...but shouldnt you go into the Poetry Realm with this piece...

    Just a thought
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  3. AlmostFamous

    AlmostFamous U got a problem?

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    Poetry Realm?.......
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  4. Swiss Miss

    Swiss Miss New Member

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    I apologize, I thought this was the poetry realm
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  5. Czarina WiseDome

    Czarina WiseDome Dikin' since 83...

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    you already posted this in the poetry realm!
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