Instant Legend - NEW ALBUM B-SIDES! DROP LINX

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  1. TWO M.C.S

    TWO M.C.S New Member

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    here's 4 that didn't make the cut for some reason or another

    drop links, I'll do my best to get back @ em

    http://www.myspace.com/instantlegend

    40 ounces
    Misfit
    Dusty Springfield
    Here We Go Again

    all produced by my dude Unoriginal Bastard
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  2. mouth almighty

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    peeping that dusty springfield track

    this is different, beat is mad chilled, verses is okay, not amazing but theres someting quite amusing about you, your delivery is a little comical sounding, dunno if that is intentional, i think it is so hope im not accidentally offending you.. i can see you have skills and you stay on topic well, although the hook isnt really doing it for me... still its a decent song anyway, just not amazing, but like you said, it didnt make the cut so i wont fully judge you based on it... melodics flow together well tho

    return the love

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1019733
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  3. TWO M.C.S

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    thanks for checkin me out - im gonna try and get @ that this afternoon
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  4. Andrew Demeyez

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    Dusty Springfield: beat sounds fucked up at first...okay it drops, nice laidback mellow shit. Flow is on point. Delivery is good, nice pronounciation- hook works, i dont like your kinda singin part of the hook- the beat could be more hyped up- like these lyrics though...not some bling bling flop lol coo coo

    Here We Go Again: beat aint shit... lyrics is good, till you describe yaself as a vampire, that was kinda gay, callin yaself freaky as shit- hook is fine, cool singin in the background- i got valiums i know where ya commin from... and worse yet i could not get high- oh i feel that line play boy- shit works

    I aint listenin to the rest cuz i gotta dip n go to work...

    but return the love and hit up my link:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1020583
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  5. TWO M.C.S

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    mowf, gotcha, demeyesz, i still owe ya homie - i caught the add request on myspace, good lookin out - I'll hit you up soon
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  6. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin to Dusty Springfield

    beat i wasnt really feelin , the flow was on point , rode the beat nice ,

    hook was aight , i liked the ryme scheme , topic was dope ,

    get back at me
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1020973

    -Kamikaze Lyricist
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  7. TWO M.C.S

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    got you two back, finally
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  8. Andrew Demeyez

    Andrew Demeyez Weed Smoker

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    Okay I returned to peep the rest:

    40 Oz: lmao with a needle in my mouth and a joint in my arm LOL!! The beat is some jazzy shit- its okay- Im kinda feelin it- its hip hop as hell though too...Not really somethin to bang in the whip though- flow and delivery is good- like ya voice- lyrics is dope as hell in some spots and better in others- Good lookin~

    Misfit: fairy tales ass sampled beat-talkin bout bitches lmao "one even drugged me robbed me n rapped me" - u got some cool punch lines and nice rhyme scheme in this... I can tell you smoke alotta weed too- funny ron jaremy line, nice.

    Got a new one for you to peep, called I PRAY ft Sharaya
    get at me:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1021142
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  9. TWO M.C.S

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    i'll def get @ that thread - and good lookin out - been waitin for some feedback on 40 Oz
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  11. Blues

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    peepin 40oz...

    you sound mad early 90's dude...it's kinda fresh actually.....you got some hook skills....ha@'i'm getting drunk tonight,,you gettin drunk tonight' part....

    I like the beat...mixing was good....1st verse was alright lyrically..some corny parts tho..i liked the 2nd verse better....

    There's 2 things i look for when i review a song...
    1.) Do I want to turn it up louder?
    2.) Do I want to hit 'repeat'?

    I did both things when I heard this song....would I burn this?..nah...but I wouldnt be mad if someone put this on while i was cleaning my place too...plus it made want to check out more of your songs.

    There are others here who definately fall more into "sick-lyrical-beast-emcee"..or at least..their trying to aspire to that...but with you...I sense somehting more of a songwriter more than anything..you dont really try to wow anyone with complex schemes,flow or metaphors...or get by on swag....your just trying to write a good song...and that's something I can definately dig,man....keep it up.

    peep when u can..
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1018534

    peace
    Blues
    Odyssey Deep
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  12. TWO M.C.S

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    i still owe you gents
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    got you both
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    fuckin sleepers
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  17. Sever

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    Dusty Springfield.

    Beat is madd laid back, kind of on that oldschool shit. This was kind of on the line between being really laid back and kind of lackluster.

    40 Oz. Once again beat's a little bit more laid back, sounds like some Madlib shit, is this self produced? lol @ tae bo line.. was kind of silly but it came off confident, lol @ fingers in a beehive. I think if you had studio quality you'd actually have a marketable sound for Sublime, 311, OAR heads lol, no offense.

    All in all you've got a good flow, very good things working for you. I just think I'd like to hear you on some more aggressive energetic shit. BUt this was good. 7.75 out of 10.

    by the way if you're interested could you please peep on of my new tracks on my page, www.myspace.com/joehoward , either 'Light Your Shit Up' or 'Memorial Day'.. but much love yo, keep spittin'. Thanks in advance if you peep
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  18. TWO M.C.S

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    appreciate you getin @ me, I will hit up your myspace page 4 sure

    and those are studio tracks, unmastered though
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