Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here!' started by littleslimlocc, May 21, 2007.
good lookin out folkers!
spoon! glad you got that shit!!
thx for the love fam.
btw i peeped this b4 .. thought i replied. o wel. either way..
this beat is mellow as hell.. just chill to it so im feelin that .
that hook got that .. i duno sounds good cant xplain it. lol
u came ill on this .. flow fits it right .. lyrics r real ..
spoon came ill on this too.. the trak is his type of steez..
this was dope though.. i been feelin ur shit for a min on the low . keep doin it right.
holla sometime if u ever wnana get down on sutin.
stay up fam.
iight...the beat is chill shit is straight...lyrics are pretty good but the flow is choppin up here and there...delivery is also boring...
2nd verse - delivery, flow and lyrics are killin it here at the beginnin...i aint really feelin the final 4 bars or so...flow kinda chops up...lol @ roundin the tips cuz i dont wanna hurt you...concept was iight there but i aint really feelin how u delivered it...nice verse tho overall...
overall - this joint was nice...aint what im into tho...more of a underground ladies song...yall did ya thing on it tho...1st verse was choppy with the flow but was still straight...second verse was nice flow and all aint really feelin the voice, which in turn makes me not like your delivery at some points in the verse, but it was a solid verse none the less
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