Insomnia

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum, May 24, 2003.

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  1. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    ^^^holy shit this is old lol
    (i'm not the one that upped it)
    post some new stuff though hun =)
    test
  2. Evg.poet

    Evg.poet As the Heart Speaks...

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    WOW!!!!! That was truly awesome. It flowed so well. Like one of those pieces you read faster and faster and get really upset when its over. Awesome.
    test
  3. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    What the hell? Yo, this was a keystyle from four years ago! I literally don't remember writing it, and can about guess that I was on something. Benadryl or what have you...

    I haven't written poems lately, just songs. Lot and lots and lots of songs.

    Like the one in my sig.

    I'll try to get back to the poetry, tho.
    test
  4. Yahunyahti

    Yahunyahti New Member

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    Great poem, man. I especially felt this part:

    "Try
    Not to deny
    The reality of dreams
    Reality of screams
    Reality of scenes
    I see that reality
    And that reality is me
    Frightfully crying
    The insanity
    Is prying
    Through the thousands of eyes
    We perceive"


    Every time I read through it I get goose bumps. It's been a while since I wrote any poems, though I've been reading quite a few. This just brought the urge to write back. Thanks for the inspiration.
    test
  5. AKIDO

    AKIDO My Spirit Has Awakened

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    Wow. This was perfect. One of the best poems I've read in a long long time. Tight shit with an incredible gift.

    ONE
    test
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