Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum, May 24, 2003.
^^^holy shit this is old lol
(i'm not the one that upped it)
post some new stuff though hun =)
WOW!!!!! That was truly awesome. It flowed so well. Like one of those pieces you read faster and faster and get really upset when its over. Awesome.
What the hell? Yo, this was a keystyle from four years ago! I literally don't remember writing it, and can about guess that I was on something. Benadryl or what have you...
I haven't written poems lately, just songs. Lot and lots and lots of songs.
Like the one in my sig.
I'll try to get back to the poetry, tho.
Great poem, man. I especially felt this part:
Not to deny
The reality of dreams
Reality of screams
Reality of scenes
I see that reality
And that reality is me
Through the thousands of eyes
Every time I read through it I get goose bumps. It's been a while since I wrote any poems, though I've been reading quite a few. This just brought the urge to write back. Thanks for the inspiration.
Wow. This was perfect. One of the best poems I've read in a long long time. Tight shit with an incredible gift.
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