Insane Tourney Round 1 - tbone vs. ThatsNotMyName

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  1. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    The Deadline for this First round will bw Thursday, March 29th... Midnight... Pacific Time

    16 lines...

    no more

    less if you want

    Voting Deadline will be Sunday Night at Midnight,,, Pacific Time

    No one Under 100 Posts votes will be accepted unless they are in the tourney

    Good Luck!
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  2. ThatsNotMyName

    ThatsNotMyName The Conquering Lion

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    It's 2 AM in the morning, ready to catch a body
    A real thug, no love, do an 187 on your mommy
    In order to beat my bars, you gon' need a lyrical army/
    Full of poets and philosophers to beat my bars
    And they will end up in the asylum trying to figure that out/
    I'm way ahead of the streets, I'm way ahead of my time
    I could reach the sun with my hands, just to increase my shine
    And in order to get the mic from me in a cypher you would need a nine
    Even killing me you would come off soft with your nursery rhyme from your female mind
    I'm like a komodo dragon, have venom inside
    Putting this line out there in case you decide to bite/
    This is for emcee's in a heavywieght section just listen
    Don't try to rap, Insanevillian won't put no bitches division/
    I'm from a place where bitches belong in the kitchen and circus freaks are not wanted
    I know you hermaphrodite, you filled your About Me sheet but left your Gender: Undecided/
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  3. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    judging by your name, you confused hoe
    a toilet bowl, pop his lid to rinse his flow
    streets want the real, they aint feeling ya though
    we know you irrelevant, learn to stay on ya toes
    reason why ya verse maintain, you recycle to much
    ya verse lack substance, without original concepts or a punch
    bring it to ya round table, breakfast, dinner, or lunch
    serving u two for three, so u can't take bites from the crunch
    you already showing flaws, ya style getting hung up
    ya name is an excuse, for ya wack flows being brought up

    Aight

    ya weak punches fail to hit, we know you a Alias
    you not Intelligent, just blaspheme, and Belligerent
    could be a sale person for hostess, ya verse pack wit that filler shit
    seen ya peeping my cypher, so he thought i was prey
    now he can't lean on his name, so his excuse he threw the win my way
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  4. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    oh man this shit was crazy thatsnotmyname was aight but i felt tbone came off wit more personals so imma give this 1 to tbone...not hatin on the other cat but tbone came off more vote....TBONE
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  5. Circleplex

    Circleplex New Member

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    TNMN:
    It's 2 AM in the morning, ready to catch a body
    A real thug, no love, do an 187 on your mommy

    Eh

    In order to beat my bars, you gon' need a lyrical army/
    Full of poets and philosophers to beat my bars
    And they will end up in the asylum trying to figure that out/

    beat my bars didnt rhyme with ish. u really said "lyrical"? you used beat my bars twice in 2 bars. not good


    I'm way ahead of the streets, I'm way ahead of my time
    I could reach the sun with my hands, just to increase my shine

    nah

    And in order to get the mic from me in a cypher you would need a nine
    Even killing me you would come off soft with your nursery rhyme from your female mind

    time/shine/nine/rhyme/mind wtf stop dat.punch wasnt good

    I'm like a komodo dragon, have venom inside
    Putting this line out there in case you decide to bite/

    inside/bite nah dont work. punch wasnt great but at least make it rhyme

    This is for emcee's in a heavywieght section just listen
    Don't try to rap, Insanevillian won't put no bitches division/

    meh

    I'm from a place where bitches belong in the kitchen and circus freaks are not wanted
    I know you hermaphrodite, you filled your About Me sheet but left your Gender: Undecided/

    wanted/undecided wtf mayne rap has rhyming in, least rhyme 1 syllabel come the fuck on. punch wasnt great



    Tbone:
    judging by your name, you confused hoe
    a toilet bowl, pop his lid to rinse his flow

    hoe/flow smh this aint 1974 nigga. punch wasnt good

    streets want the real, they aint feeling ya though
    we know you irrelevant, learn to stay on ya toes

    nah. 1 syllabel rhyme again

    reason why ya verse maintain, you recycle to much
    ya verse lack substance, without original concepts or a punch

    nah

    bring it to ya round table, breakfast, dinner, or lunch
    serving u two for three, so u can't take bites from the crunch

    nah

    you already showing flaws, ya style getting hung up
    ya name is an excuse, for ya wack flows being brought up

    you rhymed up with up

    fuck that


    Aight

    ya weak punches fail to hit, we know you a Alias
    you not Intelligent, just blaspheme, and Belligerent

    alias/belligerent

    mayne, belligerent has what, 4 syllabels? rhyme at least 1 of dem shits come on


    could be a sale person for hostess, ya verse pack wit that filler shit
    seen ya peeping my cypher, so he thought i was prey
    now he can't lean on his name, so his excuse he threw the win my way

    meh

    tnmn: nothing was stand out here tbh

    tbone: Multisyllabic rhymes - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

    vote: tnmn
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  6. JiHaD210

    JiHaD210 REAL RECOGNIZE REAL

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    It's 2 AM in the morning, ready to catch a body
    A real thug, no love, do an 187 on your mommy
    In order to beat my bars, you gon' need a lyrical army/
    Full of poets and philosophers to beat my bars
    And they will end up in the asylum trying to figure that out/
    I'm way ahead of the streets, I'm way ahead of my time
    I could reach the sun with my hands, just to increase my shine
    And in order to get the mic from me in a cypher you would need a nine

    You rhymed "body - mommy - army".. which is a stretch to say the least. One syllable rhyming and the easiest of all sounds, the "ee" sound. Where's your rhyme scheme? Then you rhymed "time -shine" that was it. And there were no punches (unless you wanna call the "187 on ya mommy" line a punch). Half of your rap was complete FILLER.

    tbone had a lot more punches and personals and and although his punches werent top quality - I think they were decent enough to win here.

    ya weak punches fail to hit, we know you a Alias
    you not Intelligent, just blaspheme, and Belligerent

    this was a stretch - however


    Vote: tbone
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  7. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    Vote=. Thatsnotmyname

    Thatsnot had more.coherent bars overall, although tbone had a very grimy southern flow it just wasn't battle oriented , neither really had any punches that hit hard but thatsnot was a bit more lyrical and his lines made more sense
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  8. -MV-

    -MV- Banned

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    This battle..was mediocre[ no offense]..
    the flow was there.

    Like raz said.. Thatsnotmyname had more coherent disses.. came more aggressive.
    and had harder hitting lines..


    also.... @ tbone..you tried to rhyme alias and beligerant... wtf bro?


    v/ thatsnotmyname
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  9. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    vote thats not my name

    nobody really brought the insanity here... both simple verses with bad rhyme schemes

    tbone did have the better floe but thats not my name came with the more coherent verse barely....

    even though i wanted to vote against you, for this

    In order to beat my bars, you gon' need a lyrical army/
    Full of poets and philosophers to beat my bars

    tbone, you got potential... just gotta up the ante on the creativity.. my fave line from you even though ive seen it alot before was the hostess line
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  10. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    ThatsNot:

    This is for emcee's in a heavywieght section just listen
    Don't try to rap, Insanevillian won't put no bitches division/

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    Tbone:

    seen ya peeping my cypher, so he thought i was prey
    now he can't lean on his name, so his excuse he threw the win my way


    tough call. i guess vote - ThatsNotMyName
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  11. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    That not my Name wins
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