Indecent Proposal Rough Draft (Drop Links)

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  1. Elias_Returns

    Elias_Returns New Member

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    Title: Indecent Proposal
    Beat: My Fofo (Fat Joe beat....Cool and Dre Production)
    Mixed: By No one...I cant even call what I do mixing
    Links: www.myspace.com/Derbonics
    www.soundclick.com/Derbonics

    At this moment i'm looking for help and in doing so I have opened this my space page. I'm Trying to find someone who can Mix and that is why I have decided to open up this Myspace page...I dont have money to pay but i'm hoping to find someone who's just feeling the music and willing to help out for the sake of music. Once I find someone i'm looking forward to releasing a Promo (Free for promotional use only) and an album which I hope will have the extended version of the promo come with it for either free or very low price (Price of the cd)...but thats all future talks. I'll update this page when and as progress is made.
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  2. Elias_Returns

    Elias_Returns New Member

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    Up to Up Above
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  3. Elias_Returns

    Elias_Returns New Member

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    up...damn i guess no one peeps audios anymore.
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  4. Genius.

    Genius. New Member

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    It's true you need someone to mix your tracks it's all of I thought you were talking
    but I won't even give a repsonse about your lyrics
    But I will say your quality isn't good
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  5. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin ... flow comes off nice on this ... not bad ... beats ok the fat joe beat ...
    at times the flow falls off but not much pretty dope ... A couple dubs off in there ...
    jus work on that and shit'll be there ... hit up mine

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=926540
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  6. Elias_Returns

    Elias_Returns New Member

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    Bad Lyrics? Even I know the quality is bad lol thats why i need someone to mix. Thanks for the reply though.
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  7. PHENOMENON

    PHENOMENON Blessed By The Beats..

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    listing...



    don't really care for this beat....


    I'm really trying to hear you...but your beat is too loud...and u sound off..like somebody tried to do a blend...


    but from what I could make out ..your flow & voice is cool



    keep working on it man...you gonna get it
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  8. TOOBxSOCKS

    TOOBxSOCKS Code of the Samurai

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    shit was aight man...needs work....ya flows was straight for the most part....not really feelin the lyrics....decent stuff here though..
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  9. Noncentz

    Noncentz Sieg Heil, M'fer!

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    This shit sucks, this sounds like a generic local mixtape cut..

    Nothin personal, its just like it seems all hiphop is starting to sound the same with very few execptions.
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  10. LeEo

    LeEo aka L Dubz

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    ok first off liek was ponted out before the beat is way to loud it killin your vocals.....turn down your adlibs and make sure they in sync wit the main vocals it makes the flow sound very sloppy and hard to understand......i think it would be best for you to re record this i don't like commentin on a emcee i can;t hear properly......one

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=927251
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  11. Elias_Returns

    Elias_Returns New Member

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    Only seems Generic because I cant mix and its a rough draft. And this is old its been written from a while ago. I'ms ure if it was mixed better and people could understand what I was sayin they'd feel it alot more. But again i'm just postin cause I want to see if theres anyone who will help me get my stuff mixed down properly and fix those errors that have been mentioned already. The final version would sound different...Wont even have the same title who knows if it'll even be the same beat. But thanks to everyone who replied. Peace
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  12. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    Wow a rough draft is an understatement lol It's hard to make out half the stuff ur saying. The flow will be on that falls off. Some of those adlibs are so off lol Yea u badly need someone to mix ur stuff. The beat's cool. The lyrics that i could make out were aight.

    Return the favor
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=928203
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