In the sky was a parade

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  1. Carpe Noctem

    Carpe Noctem Neos Helios

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    That held amusements larger than earth.
    A crack of lightning
    Covered in a pattern of eyes
    That glared into my soul
    And imprinted insight.
    I bled my veins
    Clean of the milleniums of hand-me-down sin.
    Looked to the sky
    Where the marching band played a tune
    A tune that I remembered from somewhere
    Somewhere long ago.
    It was the tones of the infinite
    The undying rhythm of the universe
    Lulling me
    Pulling me back
    Into the great womb once again.
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  3. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    I pictured a carnival , nice job here with the lighting line.
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    patrown student for life

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    ^good line
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    oh this fire kid i diggy dug it.
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    Nebulaz fear God, not man

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    Short and sweet. I would love a series of these actually. I'd be estatic if you told me you were working on "And on the ground was a..." "In the dirt was a..."
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