In light of Sadistik sayin I always sound the same/predictable - "Soldier Song" BANGA

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  1. Celph Centered

    Celph Centered Detroit's Voice

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  2. Celph Centered

    Celph Centered Detroit's Voice

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    damn wake up
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  3. Logic

    Logic IDP Ya Herr'd?

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    well you ain't gettin no $ from me nigguh, so you better just man up & record your verse for that track we're doing lol



    EARLY too.. slackin' ass dude lol



    this shit is hard, hook is hot


    beat fits the beat nicely.. well done my man
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  4. ChaseNCashe

    ChaseNCashe If it aint Polo, Keep It!

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    ^^^ This white boy just said nigga.

    This is good here...the Hook is whats up...I like the hook better than the first verse.

    Beat is dumb low. Your quality is better than the beats quality.

    This is a nice ass storytelling track.

    2nd verse is real shit...yeah i'm feeling this shit...she's your tour guide to the safe so you wait it out... This verse was hot.

    3rd verse is hot too..niggas kickin in the door.
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  5. Celph Centered

    Celph Centered Detroit's Voice

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    good lookin out fellas and Logic I'm still waitin for your verse lol
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  6. I SUCK AT POKER < DONKEY

    I SUCK AT POKER < DONKEY who fuen CARES

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    this might have been one of my biggest problems with the song but i couldnt word it
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  7. Karosene

    Karosene MISTERKABEATS.COM

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    tight shit..ive heard u once before..and u neva dissapointed me...verse are right on..lyrics are tight...yur quality sounds nice too..alot clearer than wat i heard b4....jus that the beat is waaay too low..but still this is nice..doesnt really ruin it for me...overall this is tight track man..pz
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  8. SadistiK1

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    Whoa, threw me off lol... First off, I didnt mean it to come off the way it did, about you in particuliar... I meant about most MCs in general (including a lot of my favorites) just a weird personal preferance I have lol... I also didnt mean as an artists YOU are predictable, but the structure of the song, big difference.

    Anyways, I pissed you off so the least I can do is give some critique....

    beat is really different, really boring to me, it sounds like theres nothing to it... First verse is mad different...

    hook is cool, the low-pitched layer is a little much for me, Id up the pitch a touch and lower the volume like 2 DBs, thats just me tho, I doubt many will agree....

    2nd verse is nice. Cadence is ill. Sound real comfortable.

    This sounds much more natural than the last track I heard from you ( Forgot which ), so you still sound a bit Budden ish, but only in your voice, not in the delivery so you cant help that. I think its a good thing actually.

    3rd verse was dope....

    Overall I think it was cool, seems more experimental for you than an album type track but its cool for what it is.


    But I want you to know I didnt mean CELPH IS PREDICTABLE. I just meant that I expect intro/verse/hook/verse/hook/outro from your tracks, which isnt bad... Thats why I listed k nice and grav, because their STRUCTURE is different, not talent, so please dont think Im hatin my man... I even copped the Nu Tez CD and wrote a review for yall lol.
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  9. exothermic

    exothermic Well-Known Member

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    like this beat which beats this?... qualitys iight....

    flows nice..... deliverys nice for this track.... hook lolol its iight but the effect fucks it up.... lyrics decent as well rhyme scheme cool... overall i like this tho.... feeling the vibe for the beat n shit....

    return feedback plz
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12373812#post12373812
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  10. I SUCK AT POKER < DONKEY

    I SUCK AT POKER < DONKEY who fuen CARES

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    wtf u wanna hear like a bridge and some breakdowns with some clapping shit.
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  11. mc k-nice

    mc k-nice New Member

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    i liked this joint
    scheme was very ill
    could hear some of the detroit/royce influence especially in the hook with the cadence and the pitch bent layer
    story was well paced
    ur always real comfortable and in control
    i fucks with this joint
    the clique stay by my siiiiiiiiiiiiide <-- thats my joint woOoOooo

    this dude self bangs out like 7 tracks a day on some DZK quickness...does EPs on his smoke break and shit
    lol

    stay up
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  12. SadistiK1

    SadistiK1 Washingtonian

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    Why are you clogging his thread with dumb shit like that? Since when does VARIANCE mean 'breakdowns with clapping?'

    You act like it has to have the same structure to be a song, its MUSIC, music is limitless, be imaginative. And it IS possible to be creative without clapping, crazy huh?

    Anyways, uppin.
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  13. I SUCK AT POKER < DONKEY

    I SUCK AT POKER < DONKEY who fuen CARES

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    lollllllllllllllllllllll
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  14. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    cool shit, a bit boring though..
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  15. BTruth

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    omg ..you ALWAYS come through self, reminds me of some royce death is certain shit and thats my favorite album of the last 2 years so thats sayin somethin
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  16. Celph Centered

    Celph Centered Detroit's Voice

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    Thanx Truth much appreciated fam

    Yes this was inspired by Gangsta off of Death Is Certain but I didn't yap his style so it's love... I'ma throw an outro at the end givin um props and all..
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  17. Celph Centered

    Celph Centered Detroit's Voice

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    throwin a good mixed version up... may as well... Might throw another jointo n the page too so look out
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  18. hook sounds straight up like some royce 5'9 type shit... dopeness...
    i like the beat... but its SOO LOW.. and yeah ya quality is better than the beats..lol...

    but this is nice man... flow is dope... delivery is dope.. lyrically ill to.... that hook just gets me..


    but dope track, i downloaded it..

    fucker
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  19. Conceited One

    Conceited One Please Say The Baby

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    Loved this...been bumping the shit outta this the past few days..
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