I'm The Shy Boy

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  1. Deficiency

    Deficiency True Poetical Emcee

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    "Shy Boy"

    If words popped out and my silence
    broke, would my words mean anything
    to you? Would you even stop to listen or would
    my words go into one ear and out
    the other? I'm the shy boy that noone ever
    took the time to get to know. I'm the shy boy that most
    kids in class thought was a drug addict
    and was ploting to kill everyone. I'm the shy boy
    that never talked out loud to people and had
    no self confidence in himself. Sure, I was
    quiet but, what was hiding was a caring and loving
    guy that never got to be seen by
    the public eye.. because, my true self was camafloged
    by a world of silence..

    I'm the shy boy.
    test
  2. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    i really enjoyed this piece....i love how u painted a lil pic in here for me...i see u sittin in the corner of the class silent while everyone else is raisin hell......this was dope.....

    .....when i first looked at it i thought..damn this is short..but it still had a lot in it..dont think there is any need to make it longer....

    good job deficiency......i like what you droppin today..

    and keep writtin...helps to get this kinda shit off your chest...

    up
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    nice work, lpoet took the words right out my mouth

    one luv
    test
  4. Deficiency

    Deficiency True Poetical Emcee

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  5. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    i had to quote the whole poem... i just had to do it... cuz this is a reflection of me except i'm a girl... omg... this was a great piece indeed...
    test
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