I'm sorry

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Zeta, Mar 5, 2004.

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  1. Zeta

    Zeta New Member

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    I guess the alcohol
    and all the learned behaviors
    I once saw
    Crept on me too, I couldn't hold back
    like the liquor
    Had me under the devil's attack
    I'm sorry it didn't work out,
    but we weren't good for each other
    I could never face your mother
    After all we put eachother through
    I"m telling you dude
    Those spirits have me acting a fool
    I'm a dumbass for staying with you
    For six months
    You had something I wanted
    But you used me too
    you can have the do'
    It's something I feel I owe
    Cause I slipped first
    All the shit welled up in my soul
    Had me with an unquenchable thirst
    But my expressions keep me pressin
    For ideals I need to tell you
    I feel
    No more drinkin no more faulty thinking
    I'm sorry I hurt you
    "We're through"
    Is the present I'm giving to you
    I feel like my father...
    I'm the worst daughter
    I'm sorry you didn't deserve
    To be treated that way
    My hand struck your face
    I didn't mean to disgrace
    You the way you did me
    I hope your life goes on happily ever after
    and no longer will this
    SHIT matter

    This is a vent, I feel really bad about hitting my ex, it was so wrong even if at the time I felt like he deserved it, he didn't. I was all crunk and acting stupid. I don't like myself when I drink, so I'm not going to anymore. AHHHHH, peace
    test
  2. CommonenemY

    CommonenemY locomokopokeyohoehoe

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    yea ok.....your explanation made more sense of what you wrote......i was figuring thats it had meant something along those lines but your explanation ended speculation....

    nice read.....
    test
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