I'm Deon 1-0 Vs. PENALTY 0-1

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  1. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00 Pacific time.
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 10:00 EST
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 100 posts.
    No 1 line voting!

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    Oz --- JayGood259oz
    Super --- x Hazmat x
    Blackdef --- Yo Boi Curt
    Tekneek --- Tekneek2006
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  2. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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  3. Orange407County

    Orange407County Well-Known Member

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    i bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god?
    i bet thousands wanna IM Deon..
    'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com
    you'sa fable, ey Oz whats wit the easy matches?
    watch me swing this axe 'n cleave ya back in..
    make it harder ta' breathe like fab did
    u tryina meet boys here?
    internet fags is your favorite shit..
    i got the talent..
    'n you got his pics on ya favorites list
    voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
    u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse
    you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls
    think u hard cause u plastered..
    like we cant punch holes in walls
    i was dope to the cats u'da rode heavy
    i'll bury you 2 ft..
    that puts u what, 348345 dudes bellow Epi?
    shit, im on topic..i might burn ya..
    this fagot'd be Calibre.. if i was mic burna
    lets hate the meth lines..i fuckin burned you..
    plus gave u Cal's vote 'n prolly Serge too
    we can go blast, but if you see me pull it?
    bet you move away from the gun like a speedin bullet
    this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin..
    'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted

    blah...
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  4. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    hahaah, that last line is fucking retro as hell......thats a good line


    should be a dope match, and i dont know who either of these aliases is
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  5. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=835623


    syn champed this league, back when my pops was around,
    nd if he was alive man,
    he be proud of this being the SECOND time I shut you out/
    and after this son, you'll feel like the suckiest artist
    since i broke ya streak last time we faced...
    now i'll help you get another 1 started/
    Little to no threat to me, fuck it I'll givem doom,
    but dude wouldnt be standin tall in this battle...
    if we faught in frodos living room/
    Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn,
    Hoes say he AIM's to please first
    with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/
    was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks,
    for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/
    im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act,
    since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/
    Now since I'm Deon, i'll let you know I speak truth,
    you just wasted 20 lines, speakin on dudes who'd beat you/
    My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind,
    While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/
    and you come iffy at times, least you tried ya hardest,
    but fall back for the real men...
    like super when blackdef got modded/
    dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines,
    shoulda stuck with what you had...
    now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/

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  6. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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  7. Worst Enemy

    Worst Enemy ex-rbl champ, so?

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    Deon won.

    Why?

    Much harder verse.
    Vote - I'm Deon
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  8. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    huh i dont think so lmfao
    vote l8r
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  9. MFB

    MFB Ciroc Boys

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    Good battle here but clearly there was an obvious winner...

    Penalty, i wasn't honestly feelin' your verse to much man, seriously i seen you come alot harder but it just seems like you got outshined here real bad. You had some good punches and shit but they didnt connect as hard as I'm Deon's did

    I'm Deon, real strong verse, your punches along with personals hit hard and you also had more LOL lines then your opponent. The aim line was tight along with your closer. you did feed off his verse with the "naming people" but that doesnt matter cause the rest of your verse made up for it

    vote- I'm Deon
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  10. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    deon won...had better lines...big curves wuz my fav of tha 3 I liked...


    vote=deon

    1Ne
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  11. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    an aim line ?
    good thing the league restarted i guess its original now

    the closer was bad, yeah the ratio line
    big curves wasnt good,
    oc line was pretty cool

    penalty had the closer
    chicks wit dicks, pretty matched
    but a few more decent lines

    the epi lines werent doing it though

    vote - penalty
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  12. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
    u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse


    this was the line of the battle,

    Syn's style is fucking second to none on this shit, dude has like a DipSet Text swagger, haha shits appealing as all hell

    honestly, people need to start looking at more than just who had the better lines, syn's shit was more appealing, better flow, concepts were fresher, all that shit...

    he showed that a battle verse does not have to be all "setup - punch" and shit all the time

    fuck what yall are seeing, syn got this...

    VOTE - Penalty aka Syn
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  13. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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    Wait, so if you have the better lines you STILL lose? Thats a new one pal.
    why would you look past the BETTER lines?



    with that sad though.

    3-2


    props and g'luck to syn syn
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  14. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    your lines sucked dude, hes saying look outside the box though
    its about the overall verse and style and appeal

    syns got some original ass formatting, it all fits well
    that verse was dope as fuck either way though
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  15. iLLweezy

    iLLweezy ILLWeeMaN

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    Syn - Verse was dope as hell. Flow was onpoint, and you were consistent with the disses. "The Talent" line was crazy. At first I didn't understand, then I gave it a 2nd look, and BOOM! Shit was fire. Had me laughin' my ass off with this kid in my computer class right now. Then you came with that Epi line, and that was raw. Soiunded nice, and a fresh concept to use. I didn't like the Serge line or the Speeding Bullet line. But the closer was crazy. Made me laugh, and another fresh concept. Dope verse.

    I'm Deon - What suddenly turned me away from you verse was the fact that you played off his verse your very first line. That was just horrible. But you came back with the streak line, and that was very nice personal/punch combination. Flow was on point, and you have consistancy. I don't like how you utalize that style in text writing, though. Just doesn't appeal to me.

    Overall - Syn shows he's more comfortable with that style, and it's not about punches. His verse flowed perfectly, and he came at his opponent time and time again, not stopping once. He had more appealing lines, while keeping in mind a sick flow and a creative choice of words

    Line of the Match: Syn
    "voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
    u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse"
    LMFAO!!

    Vote - Syn

    Vote on mine when it goes up against Calefaction

    -Weez
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  16. Dukane

    Dukane The God

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    Orange County

    i bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god?
    i bet thousands wanna IM Deon..
    'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com
    lol
    you'sa fable, ey Oz whats wit the easy matches?
    watch me swing this axe 'n cleave ya back in..
    make it harder ta' breathe like fab did
    lol
    u tryina meet boys here?
    internet fags is your favorite shit..
    i got the talent..
    'n you got his pics on ya favorites list
    lol
    voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
    u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse
    aiight
    you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls
    think u hard cause u plastered..
    like we cant punch holes in walls
    ohhh
    i was dope to the cats u'da rode heavy
    i'll bury you 2 ft..
    that puts u what, 348345 dudes bellow Epi?
    Damn
    shit, im on topic..i might burn ya..
    this fagot'd be Calibre.. if i was mic burna
    lets hate the meth lines..i fuckin burned you..
    plus gave u Cal's vote 'n prolly Serge too
    ok
    we can go blast, but if you see me pull it?
    bet you move away from the gun like a speedin bullet
    this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin..
    'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted
    ok

    I'm Deon

    syn champed this league, back when my pops was around,
    nd if he was alive man,
    he be proud of this being the SECOND time I shut you out/
    ok
    and after this son, you'll feel like the suckiest artist
    since i broke ya streak last time we faced...
    now i'll help you get another 1 started/
    nice
    Little to no threat to me, fuck it I'll givem doom,
    but dude wouldnt be standin tall in this battle...
    if we faught in frodos living room/
    eh..
    Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn,
    Hoes say he AIM's to please first
    with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/
    nice
    was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks,
    for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/
    nice
    im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act,
    since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/
    hahaha
    Now since I'm Deon, i'll let you know I speak truth,
    you just wasted 20 lines, speakin on dudes who'd beat you/
    eh..
    My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind,
    While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/
    eh..
    and you come iffy at times, least you tried ya hardest,
    but fall back for the real men...
    like super when blackdef got modded/
    aiight
    dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines,
    shoulda stuck with what you had...
    now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/
    nice

    Vote = OC
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  17. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    vote = penalty

    i wasn't really feelin some of the concepts I'm Deon posted
    some were a lil' too basic compared to penalty's shit
    it was a lil' close tho
    i just felt like penalty wanted the win more than Deon did
    with lines like this it's hard to lose...


    good battle, holla
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  18. TeNk

    TeNk New Member

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    bet ur just angry, nobody likes you god?
    i bet thousands wanna IM Deon..
    'n they're all on chickswitdicks.com
    nah IM deon lines are played as fuck against him.

    you'sa fable, ey Oz whats wit the easy matches?
    watch me swing this axe 'n cleave ya back in..
    make it harder ta' breathe like fab did
    eh.

    u tryina meet boys here?
    internet fags is your favorite shit..
    i got the talent..
    'n you got his pics on ya favorites list
    coo.

    voters DONT LIKE YOU, they'll thinka me first..
    u couldnt win if jeff seen the outside link in my verse
    aight.

    you's an occasional thug, duke we all got balls
    think u hard cause u plastered..
    like we cant punch holes in walls
    ok.

    i was dope to the cats u'da rode heavy
    i'll bury you 2 ft..
    that puts u what, 348345 dudes bellow Epi?
    nice.

    shit, im on topic..i might burn ya..
    this fagot'd be Calibre.. if i was mic burna
    no.
    lets hate the meth lines..i fuckin burned you..
    plus gave u Cal's vote 'n prolly Serge too
    well i dont know the personal, so i cant say much

    we can go blast, but if you see me pull it?
    bet you move away from the gun like a speedin bullet
    na.

    this text shit is mines, ya not ill postin..
    'n i was champ when 'IM Deons Pops' still posted
    coo closer.


    syn champed this league, back when my pops was around,
    nd if he was alive man,
    he be proud of this being the SECOND time I shut you out/
    ok.

    and after this son, you'll feel like the suckiest artist
    since i broke ya streak last time we faced...
    now i'll help you get another 1 started/
    eh.

    Little to no threat to me, fuck it I'll givem doom,
    but dude wouldnt be standin tall in this battle...
    if we faught in frodos living room/
    no

    Gettin chicks, thats a lesson to learn,
    Hoes say he AIM's to please first
    with MSN n' Yahoo comin second and third/
    cool
    was takin you serious, but read and gave God some thanks,
    for showing me the worst OC, since the one starin Colin Hanks/
    lol

    im serious kid, celibacy should be the fairest act,
    since youre effin godly, and havin an affair with wack/
    nice.

    Now since I'm Deon, i'll let you know I speak truth,
    you just wasted 20 lines, speakin on dudes who'd beat you/
    nah.

    My whip got dope handlin, hit the turns like a whirlwind,
    While the only big curves you hug, are your obese girl friends/
    no...

    and you come iffy at times, least you tried ya hardest,
    but fall back for the real men...
    like super when blackdef got modded/
    damn lol.

    dude had 18 originally, but your 20 aint doper than mines,
    shoulda stuck with what you had...
    now you have a lower ratio of quotable lines/
    nice closer.

    v-deon.
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  19. Orange407County

    Orange407County Well-Known Member

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  20. castro'DAMUS

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    good lines dont mean shit if you cant put them together properly, and with a style that keeps readers reading with anticipation of the next line, syn had that.... you didn't, take the advice and use it, dont complain about it, shit..

    flow, concepts, structure, lyrics, style, appeal, etc...

    all that shit matters, not just the punchlines,

    thats what im saying
    test
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