I'm a Flaming Hurricane (Latest song i wrote)

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  1. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    I'm a Flaming Hurricane

    I'm a flaming hurricane
    Don't stand in front of me.

    Cause I'm burning down everything in my path
    After what love has done to me.

    I'm breathing fire.

    I suggest you get out my way
    Cause I'm mad as hell
    Bout what I been through
    I don't like being nobody's fool.

    You pretended to love me
    You had me sitting on top of the world.

    You know all the things that I been through
    But my biggest hurt came form you.

    How could you betray me?
    And pull the wool over my eyes.

    Had me thinking that you loved me
    But it all end up being lies.

    I'm a flaming hurricane
    Don't stand in front of me.

    Cause I'm burning down everything in my path
    After what love has done to me.

    I'm breathing fire.

    I suggest you get out my way
    Cause I'm mad as hell
    Bout what I been through
    I don't like being nobody's fool.

    You should of been an artist
    Cause you painted a pretty picture.

    About how things was going be
    After I got with'cha.

    It was everything but what you said
    Sometimes even worst.

    God knows I'm a christen
    Sometimes you made me curse.

    I'm not saying that I'm perfect
    But I never lied to you.

    I wouldn't wish on my worst enemy
    All the things you put me through.

    I'm a flaming hurricane
    Don't stand in front of me.

    Cause I'm burning down everything in my path
    After what love has done to me.

    I'm breathing fire.

    I suggest you get out my way
    Cause I'm mad as hell
    Bout what I been through
    I don't like being nobody's fool.
    Terry L. Sidney
    2/13/2011
    test
  2. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    For my daughter and sister to sing. got a pop feel to it soft rock feel as well. thats what i think.
    test
  3. ScimonomicS

    ScimonomicS New Member

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    yeah i was going to say this seems more like a song than a poem, still i appreciate the form.
    test
  4. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    thank you Sci.
    test
  5. hearstothemute

    hearstothemute New Member

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    like stated, it's a bit hard to just read this without getting to hear how you intend it. give us a link if you get it recorded.
    test
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