(if i ruled tha world) dsp & redeyez collab.

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  1. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    FEEL THIS..............






    If I ruled the world. (If I ruled the world ...)
    Things would be different, and that's for sure
    If I ruled the world. (If I ruled the world ...)
    I'd try to give everyone diamonds and pearls
    If I ruled the world ....
    Yes, If I ruled the world ...


    DSP-

    If I ruled the world, shit would ne q bit diff'rent
    Give a quick listen to my position before you diss it
    They say they Christian, then they ain't gonna forgive him
    That's not practicing forgiveness to a kid that's slipping.
    Sitting their in their cool building passing judgment
    In gods eyes we all equal, but they like fuck it
    They get off when they get the chance to punish
    Make ya sick at ya stomach doesn't it when they stick ya in da dungeon
    But it doesn't seem to ever change?
    Make em hate da system and they'll never change
    If I ruled the world, we'd see better days
    We'd have better pay and wetter paint
    Machine blades on our tires, shining bright
    Chrome rolling, trunk exploding like dynamite
    setting ya ride off, evernight ya fly
    Yeah, its a life better than jail, try it my way guys,...


    If I ruled the world. (If I ruled the world ...)
    Things would be different, and that's for sure
    If I ruled the world. (If I ruled the world ...)
    I'd try to give everyone diamonds and pearls
    If I ruled the world ....
    Yes, If I ruled the world ...


    DAM....I FEEL U D ... BUT IF I RULED THIZ DIRTY WORLD........
    IT WOULD BE NO MORE PAIN.....

    IF I RULED THA WORLD
    THERE WOULD BE KNOW POOR BOY'Z -N- GIRL'Z
    NO THREE STRIKE LAW, OR GHETTO'Z
    NO STRIPPER POLE OR STILETTO'Z
    NO MORE PAIN......
    IF I RULED THA WORLD
    DRUG'Z WOULD BE NON- EXISTENT
    JUNKIE'Z IN MANSION'Z WITH A POT TO PISS IN
    WELFARE WON'T BE A OPTION, PEOPLE STOP AN LISTEN
    NO MORE PAIN......
    IF I RULED THA WORLD
    CELEBRITIE'Z WOULD'NT CONTROL OUR SEED'Z
    EVERY MONTH IZ BLACK HISTORY, NO T.V'Z
    NO NEED TO BRAIN WASH MY SOCIETY
    I WOULD END ALL WAR'Z, RACISM, -N- RIVALRY
    NO MORE PAIN......
    IF I RULED THA WORLD
    WEAPON'Z WON'T EXIST, NO MORE MISERY
    NO WEED, NO PILL'Z, NO HENNESEY
    MO THINK'N, MO SMILE'Z, MO MEMORY
    WE ALL HUMAN, ONE RACE NOT SEPARATED
    ONE COUNTRY, ONE STATE, ONE LOVE BABY
    NO MORE PAIN......
    IF I RULED THA WORLD.....DAM *SMH*


    If I ruled the world. (If I ruled the world ...)
    Things would be different, and that's for sure
    If I ruled the world. (If I ruled the world ...)
    I'd try to give everyone diamonds and pearls
    If I ruled the world ....
    Yes, If I ruled the world ...
    test
  2. Poetic Concept

    Poetic Concept New Member

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    Whoever did the first verse killed it...second verse i didnt like very much it was rea; cliche...off tempto...n not very complex or original...I think it lacked emotion...In a rap u have to b either, lyrical, emotional, or original...I think the second verse lacked all of those components to an extent
    test
  3. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Thanks for the feedback homie
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    test
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