I wrote a poem called "My Dick" honest opinions please

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  1. Knowledge

    Knowledge Guest

    My dick
    It reminds me of a stick
    When I beat it, it goes tick
    I wish it could get a lick


    From the heart yo
    test
  2. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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  3. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    poetry is about feeling

    short
    quick
    slick
    is the dick
    that mimmicks
    a prick.
    full of hot blood
    it floods
    shooting
    all the brains
    it strains
    through
    an itty bitty hole.



    cheers
    test
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