i think

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  1. i think

    i think New Member

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    i think i need a drink
    of fresh air
    tired and woke up for a gasp of despair
    hmmmm turn to my clock damn missed the bus now i gotta walk
    200 blocks
    its all super though i found a short cut
    low fade
    high pitch
    strike out the distress of living in a mess
    ill just get up and leave go out side so i can breathe
    pack up my notepads and climb a fence
    sit on top of ideas that are passing through
    now im only 2 blocks away
    jump off
    man!
    i forgot i lost my pen
    i think i need to be gone
    test
  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    decent piece, kinda confusing but i liked the idea, seemed like you was in a place by yaself. Welcome to the realm

    one luv
    test
  3. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    i was really confused by this piece, but i think i know what the general concept was, welcome to the realm

    stay up, much love, peace
    test
  4. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    dam, i was sure id replied to this, this was a cool lil poem. had a kinda, i dunno, jive to it or sumthin....i dunno wat i mean by that, but it jst seems to fit. pz.
    test
  5. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    kinda odd...but not a bad piece...up
    test
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