I need u more

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  1. cram oremor

    cram oremor New Member

    Sep 14, 2010
    I need you more than the oxygen i breath

    with out you itz so dark that I cant see

    im tryin to be the man u see in my destiny

    but satans recipe is only death for my flesh to eat.

    the graves callin and im fallin please rescue me

    im wrestling spriritualy Lord i need U desprately

    dont let dis world get the best of me

    turn my fears into faith stronger than artilery and set me free

    Im cryin out from the depths of my inner man

    reachin out for your hand so that I can stand in your plan

    you made the sun, moon and stars so it aint no thing

    for you to bring me to a place where there aint no pain

    till that day i aint trippin ima keep believin

    till my lungs quit breathin and im sleepin in my cofin.

    i'll never question if Im saved cuz you bled for me

    your blood is my remedy, doorway to the heavenly.

    I need you more than the water I drink

    without you im like a corpse so rotten in stink

    i try ta walk up on dis water but so often i sink

    cuz my flesh is like a sock in a sink

    my confessions we'd be close like a lock in a link

    im predestined wit your hope in every thought that i think

    sketch you message on a notepad and swallow the ink

    spread you essence to the globe and feed your flock when i speak

    Im just a blood bought thug endurin mortal pain

    walkin thru the rain with a cross and a flame

    I will neva be ashamed of His name

    cuz he came from the heavens to be slain for my stains

    we need to re-arrange our thinkin itz twisted

    eternity aint off in a distance itz so close you'll miss it

    if you focus aint aimed on the mission

    let his light shine and glisten

    your righteous in him

    dont listen to satans whisperin hes trippin
  2. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

    Sep 7, 2005
    ok this was deep ... I liked the other one, but I like this one better ... very nice details, flow, and structure ... enjoyable read too
  3. cram oremor

    cram oremor New Member

    Sep 14, 2010
    Cool thanks for the feedback homie
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